The only criticism I might make is the last scene: I couldn't tell whether you meant it to be in House's viewpoint or Cameron's, and it was a little jarring since the story had consistently matched Cameron's. Otherwise, another wonderfully characterized piece that really brings Cameron and House to life on the page.

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Aww - so sweet and ultimately very House Cameron with enough Chase to add realism. Your characters were very in character :)

This story is absolutely beautiful. The characterisation is perfect and I love how you filled in the blanks with your own ideas, they fitted perfectly. The whole story is very believable and realistic. It also flows very nicely, mostly a consequence of your great style. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this and I hope you will write some more House fics.

wow, you did an amazing job on this story!

WOW. I love this story so much. Amazing analysis of Cameron... I always thought she was a really interesting character because of House's comment to her that pretty women do not go to medical school unless they are as damaged as they are beautiful, and I love how much your story reflected first Cameron's desire to be more than a pretty face and then her newfound confidence in herself - beauty and all. Thank you for writing! I really enjoyed reading this. :)