ah, this is beautiful... I especially love the paragraph that begins with "heights" - I can agree with Fai, share his point of view. And the part about not falling all so deliberately, just letting go subconsciously, couldn't have been done better, I believe. It fits Fai unbelievably well. As sad as it may be...

I love this piece and hate it at the same time. I very think it's well written. The part at the end about the sunlight looking like Fai's hair could have been cliche, but instead it really gave the story a sense of sadness and depth. Anyway, I really enjoyed this despite the fact it was so tragic.

-gasp- aww how sad... i liked the part about him wanted to sink into the ground. idk why it just sounded like something i've wanted to do before, so it really touched home i guess. is there going to be more to this? that would be cool. I really like your writing talent. you always make manage to surprise me. I think its going to turn out one way and it ends up turning out a completely different way.