I don't really like Lilith, but her brothers are awesome! God, I don't know any other fictional guys who are as cool as them.

Great story!Bravooooo!:D

your grammar is off and you keep getting your characters mixed up. you said jamie came over and talked to jamie, things like than that great story line.

Omg! I loved the Taha Aki part! I was so excited, when I first read Eclipse I thought the legend were kind of boring but then I got into them. That would be so cool if it is Taha Aki! I love your Twilight Fan Fiction stories! I am totally hooked. I hope you keep writing so far I have read To Love and Imprint, Inlaws and Outlaws, and Eye of the Beholder. You have a very good talent of writing. Keep up the wonderful work. Thankyou for writing as well when I finished Breaking Dawn I had no idea of what to read next. (I LOVE reading Lol) Then I found fanfiction and Twilight fanfiction. Now I have something to read. Are you planning on finishing the sequel to Eye of The Beholder? I hope you do. Thanks again! Bye!

Tabitha.

Great Chapter! I can't wait for the new story. I would also like to see a story about Leah and Cain's relationship. I love all your stories and hope the new sequel comes very soon!

Good job. Update soon.

Omfg loved this story! I DEFINITLY cant wait for the next chapters! I hope she doesn't die!

this was a great chapter. I truly like Ables behaviour.

it's so sad that it is actually going to end. but you can't make a story go on forever. which is sad.

That was a great chapter! I love that you had Cain be able to snap Able out of his rage toward Lil. I hope she and the baby are okay? Please post more soon I can't wait to see what happens!

I love your story. It's funny, and I read the other on too. This one's uch better.

This is just a request, you don't have to do it.

Could you make another girl phase and make her imprint on Fredo? Also, can you write a story about Cain and Leah?

All I have to say is Thank God for Jasper! I am really proud of Lil that she stood up to her family! Great Chapter! Please post more soon!

Wow, I can't wait to see what happens with her family. She needs to choose Seth so she can heal her heart more and to be there with her brothers. Please post more soon.

Poor Able! I wish there was something that they could do to help him. I can't wait to see what happens with her family. It should be interesting. Please post more soon!

Wow that was an intense chapter! Good Job! I was thinking that her family was going to come in the middle of the fight. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please post more soon!

Wow, I can't wait to see what happens with Lil and how they will survive Maria. And Now Lil's family is getting involved this should get interesting. I only hope that her family realizes the love that everyone has for Lil, Cain and Able. At least so far her family doesn't the secret of the wolves. I hope you finish this story soon.