fucking crap, just not worth reading

I wish you would have also put Hinata x Sasuke in your character list because that is honestly by far my least favorite pairing and if I had known you planned on using it I never would have read this story. It requires far too much of a character change in Hinata. Frankly it requires her to be a complete bitch and if there is one person in Naruto who I would never call a bitch it would most definitely be Hinata and when people try and make her into one in fanfictions it usually feels very very forced like in the first chapter reading Hinata’s thoughts about Sasuke make no sense to her character.

Ok story but has a HUGE plot holes in it. Byakugan and Sharingan do NOT mix. So why would he want a women that has 50/50 chance of having Byakugan over normal eyes that which will have a CHANCE to be Sharingan. Other plot hole Hyuugas and Uchihas clans do NOT like each other period. Hinata's father would cage bird seal her if she goes for the Uchiha. No matter how strong she is. Then her kids would never get the Byakugan. But still only a 50/50 chance at normal eyes for a chance at the Sharingan.

I’m liking the story so far, keep up the good work

A few questions so far: why such a big deal about Hinata about to hit the girls? It was a bitch move yes, but it's just a hit, not like Sakura doesn't hit Naruto or anything? Also,why orange isnt that overly cliche? Especially since Jiraya is already in his life?

aside from thr goddamn fact hannbi is fuckong 12 you sick fuck quite jerking readers off if your gonna write a unchia/huuyga dick sucking story

Please do, this seems like a really good story, forget what flamers say, this is pretty good

Pathetic Shitfic.

Dude, you still alive?

Not the cat girls

Too stupid

Sixteen year old but still little bastard

I want to favorite this, which I don't do often, but I can't till it's finished.

With how long its been, I'd say your liar! But I want you to prove me wrong by getting your rear in gear by putting out a few more chapters.

Okay, I'm going to give you a pass on the made up Biju and Kyuubi's lame-ass excuse for attacking Konoha (heh. What a woobie) since this was written 10 years ago and hardly any real info was out there. But take my advice, come back to this tale and update this part of it with information that is factual now.

Kind of binge read this in one sitting, so I apologize for not reviewing every chapter.

That being said, this is really fun to read. Though I noticed in the beginning the big furball said two of the tailed beasts were his mates, and now that Sakura and Ino are getting close to him, makes me wonder if they may acquire them as well and have a team of jinchuuriki.