| Reviews for Expelled |
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Sleepyhawk502 chapter 11 . 9/4 Ahh! What a wonderful story. Thanks for sharing! |
Kira Potter Jackson chapter 11 . 2/13 Harry is very rude with this sword. I like the changes. Voldy thinks he is untouchable. I liked the name that Harry and Hermione gave their son. Kira |
Kira Potter Jackson chapter 4 . 2/13 Harry met his family. British magicians are idiots, another innocent who falls. I can't believe how stupid Hermione was. Fred and George put in their place the fool of his brother Ron. Kira |
roon0 chapter 2 . 1/31 Oh wow |
Guest chapter 5 . 11/2/2019 Hey cunt, excellent job rugsweeping Hermione acting like a bitch to Harry. Are you one of those imbecilic bitches who think they don't have to face consequences for their bullshit because they are women? No wonder your husband fucked another woman in your bed. He cheated on you with a hot torrid little thing. Fuck you cunt. |
Guest chapter 11 . 7/14/2019 Interesting idea, but this is very telling, not showing. I couldn’t really get into it, kinda flat and boring. Sorry, but it is. And yes, I know it’s 10 years old. But I had to say it. |
Realmsmith chapter 4 . 4/16/2019 I note you said Myrddin family ring, but Merlin was named Myrddin Emmrys, so shouldn't it be Emmrys family ring? |
Butterfly chapter 5 . 4/12/2019 I hate Harry when he forgives so easily |
flashbak35a chapter 3 . 1/27/2019 if it's been over 1000 years for someone finding the portrait room then even Godric would not have found it. |
Guest chapter 11 . 1/20/2019 Thank you for such a wonderful story sweet and wonderfully written story, i loved it! |
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 12 . 1/3/2019 Enjoyed it, but I’m disappointed I didn’t get to read about the Weasleys’ reactions to Harry and Hermione being king and queen. |
missgsmith51 chapter 8 . 10/29/2018 I think a spur-of-the-moment wedding would be nice. No arguing and worrying about invitations, wedding venues, music, cakes, bridesmaid dresses, and all of the junk that makes people nuts ... Just let the Goblins, Elves, and Faeries handle it! I can't wait until Molly pulls her usual nonsense. I hope King Harry smacks her down ... hard! I'm surprised the Twins were not named as supporters. From what Hermione said, it sounds as though they did support Harry. Let the honeymoon begin! |
missgsmith51 chapter 3 . 10/29/2018 One question I apparently forgot to ask the first time I read this story: How is it that Harry was not incarcerated? I should think rape would be considered a pretty serious crime in the Wizarding World, due to things like line theft, inheritance, etc. Is it because Hermione is a Muggleborn and Harry is the last of an (apparently) ancient line? Would he have been either incarcerated - or even Kissed or sent through the Veil - if she had been a Pureblood? Just curious. I wonder if Dumbledore subscribed to the same theory with Harry that he had with Riddle back in 1981: If there is no body, then he may not be dead. If that is the case, does he fear Harry's return? Given what Harry has learned since he disappeared, he probably should! |
Monster King chapter 11 . 10/6/2018 Great story |
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 8 . 8/25/2018 Magical World still practicing dowry when It has been out flawed. They are in so much trouble. They seriously need to get their arrogance knocked out of them. And force kicking and Screaming to the 20th and 21st Century. |