Hi,
I have now finished reading your storyor at least what is posted of it!
I really enjoyed reading it. I like how you modernise the original story and made it believable and very funny at times as well.
The short chapters are nice as it gives the story a lot of rhythm. It kind of fits with the modern twist.
I guess you have reached a place in the story where you could mark it as completedbut I am wondering why you didn’t.
You might have lost your account credentials again, or simply moved to a different stage of your life...
Anyhowthank you for sharing this story with us.

I have am just started reading this story and I LOVE the set-down Lizzie gives Darcy in chapter 9! What a “Hunsford proposal”!

Wow. I really enjoyed your story and your version of our favorite couple. Is this meant to be the ending? If you are stopping, at least it’s not a cliff hanger. However, if you intend to post further, I eagerly await the continuation of this story.

This story is wonderful, please update the next chapters quickly! Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

Are you Finnish

I loved it. Are we getting more?!.

Then comes a baby sitting in a carriage yaaaay I wrote the last line of the sooongq

Yaaaay I was riiight

I do not think that he split up J and C

sooo good. Please post the next chapter soon!

It's been really great story. Seems a little unfinished but I still could live with it it doesn't get updated.

hey! just thought i'd point out that the chapter seems glitchy and is still in html format... and there's no way we can read it lols thanks for finally updating though

Will you finish this? Thanks

You should make an epilogue.

Love it thanks!