Reviews for Taking Hikari |
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Guest chapter 2 . 6/16/2018 THAT ENDING ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡) |
Nara chapter 2 . 9/13/2016 This is great. You wrote it nicely. Thank you. |
ShinyEmerald chapter 2 . 5/11/2015 First of all, the story is really really good and any people would like it. Second, the lemon here was just great. Gentle lemons are the best since everything was not just about lust, it's about love and care too. Lastly, the humour was good! Please do continue writing. I really really like your work! |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/18/2014 That was just sweet |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2014 Hikari was Kei Takishimaˇs was cute. |
Usui Takumi Walker chapter 2 . 11/6/2014 nice story |
Lizzy-Margaret chapter 2 . 7/5/2014 Not bad. A little awkward at the beginning, but all in all...not bad :) |
Aria chapter 2 . 4/26/2014 Absolutely brilliant and HOT! I wish I could read more about Kei and Hikari after now being sexually active xD I mean not just about them having sex but how will they act around each other now that they're this close! ;) amazing! amazing! well done! |
Aria chapter 1 . 4/26/2014 The whole whispering in ear thing was SO HOT. The best part is that you manage to keep Hikari as her clueless self, even with the whole sex thing... it has been really difficult for me to try to imagine Hikari feeling sexual attraction for Kei.. of course she is a girl that FEELS... so it would happen sooner or later... the thing is... how to put it into words without getting all ''out of character'' with her? anyway... you knew how to do it! well done! :3 |
Bloody Harly chapter 1 . 4/21/2014 It is utter shit Thank you for the time Bloody Harly |
zhuriken05 chapter 1 . 10/30/2013 HAHAHAHAH! god dammit HIKARI! I LOVE THIS STORYYYY PLEASEEEEE UPDATE 3 |
BunnyLemonWriter chapter 2 . 8/12/2013 It wasn't good... I didn't like it...IT WAS HELLA AWSOME AND I LOVE IT xD teeheee |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/26/2013 nice |
Deesha c chapter 1 . 11/10/2012 Aaahh I really loved it C: lol its so funny how dense Hikari is :P Keep writing xxx |
Take-me-away-to-paradise chapter 2 . 9/18/2012 omg this story is really amazing. I just love the ending, it was seriously very cute. |