Reviews for Taking Hikari
Guest chapter 2 . 6/16/2018
THAT ENDING ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)
Nara chapter 2 . 9/13/2016
This is great. You wrote it nicely. Thank you.
ShinyEmerald chapter 2 . 5/11/2015
First of all, the story is really really good and any people would like it.
Second, the lemon here was just great. Gentle lemons are the best since everything was not just about lust, it's about love and care too.
Lastly, the humour was good!
Please do continue writing. I really really like your work!
Guest chapter 2 . 11/18/2014
That was just sweet
Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
Hikari was Kei Takishimaˇs was cute.
Usui Takumi Walker chapter 2 . 11/6/2014
nice story
Lizzy-Margaret chapter 2 . 7/5/2014
Not bad. A little awkward at the beginning, but all in all...not bad :)
Aria chapter 2 . 4/26/2014
Absolutely brilliant and HOT! I wish I could read more about Kei and Hikari after now being sexually active xD I mean not just about them having sex but how will they act around each other now that they're this close! ;)
amazing! amazing! well done!
Aria chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
The whole whispering in ear thing was SO HOT.
The best part is that you manage to keep Hikari as her clueless self, even with the whole sex thing... it has been really difficult for me to try to imagine Hikari feeling sexual attraction for Kei.. of course she is a girl that FEELS... so it would happen sooner or later... the thing is... how to put it into words without getting all ''out of character'' with her?
anyway... you knew how to do it!
well done! :3
Bloody Harly chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
It is utter shit
Thank you for the time
Bloody Harly
zhuriken05 chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
HAHAHAHAH! god dammit HIKARI!
I LOVE THIS STORYYYY PLEASEEEEE UPDATE 3
BunnyLemonWriter chapter 2 . 8/12/2013
It wasn't good... I didn't like it...IT WAS HELLA AWSOME AND I LOVE IT xD teeheee
Guest chapter 2 . 6/26/2013
nice
Deesha c chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Aaahh I really loved it C: lol its so funny how dense Hikari is :P Keep writing xxx
Take-me-away-to-paradise chapter 2 . 9/18/2012
omg this story is really amazing. I just love the ending, it was seriously very cute.
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