A little less sweet vanilla and a little more wild cherry

o thats so sweet. the end line i mean.a nd just thought this story was great. i had red Subon before this so when the kids walked in i knew who the girl was and it was just great

AW! so cute! -im definitely craving ice cream now! :)

The recurring set was a great idea... allowing flashes of individual moments, but telling a complete story at the same time.

The banter was spot on.

The wild cherry reference just made me laugh.

And the photograph and the kids... excellent bookend.

Good job!

Ha ha ha ha. So cute. Catch ya on the flip side.

This was so cute, the ending was perfect. You are a very good writer.

i really love this story... the cutest story i read so far...

i like the flow... plus the turn of events especially when lois found out that clark's fave ice cream flavor was wild cherry...

Aw! That was just so sweet! Cutest fluff ever!

I loved this. My favorite parts the wild cherry mention, the way Paige's best friend eventually becoming her boyfriend giving a clue to Lois and Bart Jr and their daughter acting just like Clois years later. Ice cream being the way that Clark gauged Lois' emotions is perfect. Their younger kids being named after Clark's parents is so cute. I love that their first real kiss was captured on camera. Paige is a wonderful original character and has become one of my favorites ever in a Clois story. Great job.

I Loved this! Great work!

That was great. Good job.

thats so sweet - I want ice-cream! but i can't for i've just ate a stack of mini eggs...

Aww that was so so cute! :D And I loved how you had the end with Barts kid and their daughter, aww!