Reviews for escape
Regit chapter 7 . 12/13/2011
I think that if Garrow would die it would make the story better.
A Changing Persona chapter 9 . 7/27/2011
That's okay. I understand. There's just so much to do...

Anyways, awesome story.

I was all like, Erry DIDN'T rescue Arya? Baaaaaadddd!

But then, it turned out to be great!

And Sparkly!

Toodles!
e1venl0rd chapter 9 . 5/14/2011
Could you please keep writing? This is a wonderful story!
LOTL Stephanie.L chapter 8 . 8/20/2009
Can't read this. Please paragraph.
Lalaith Quetzalli chapter 7 . 7/24/2009
Garrow is still alive, that's always a plus. Also, it seems Arya may not be giving Eragon such a hard time with his affections, that's even better. I just hope you won't kill Brom. This makes me want to ask if you're going to rewrite the books, make a complete Au, a bit of both? Also, even if you dn't exactly follow cannon, will you use what we know? (Here I'm talking especially about a very important piece of information we learnt in Brisingr and that could completely transform your story if you chose to use it soon.

Anyway, I can't wait for ou to continue this, the story looks so good!
eikka492 chapter 7 . 7/14/2009
i really don't know what to write, but since you said to review, i guess i have to. anyway, this story quite good, not the worst but not the best either. yet. main thing that would make this story better would be length,'cause i like long stories. still this is a very promising. it's also VERY far away from the original story. Arya escapes herself, Garrow lives, he knows about saphira... etc. etc. but i like it that way. see ya later.

Ps sorry my bad english
sharan chapter 7 . 6/22/2009
hey,please kill wont be what he is[in the origional one]without garrows death
BetweenTwoWorlds chapter 7 . 6/21/2009
Great job! I really like it! I hope you update soon!
Xemnas Swan chapter 7 . 6/21/2009
That was surprising! I didn't know Brom was a treaser! Keep going!
Mini93 chapter 7 . 6/21/2009
Update soon
DoNotCrush chapter 7 . 6/21/2009
I hit a writer's block. Your lucky you don't have to deal with Jimmy. Btw there is a story behind that.
Darth Destroyeis chapter 7 . 6/21/2009
Definatly an interesting AU. Can't wait to get another update. Keep up the good work...

Lord Darth Destroyeis
CorLeonis92 chapter 7 . 6/21/2009
i just love this chapter. it was so sweet...especiall in the end when Arya thinks about Eragon...

update soon:)

bye
Rainbow Six chapter 7 . 6/20/2009
I personaly believe that Garrow needed to die to make Eragon who he is.

~Rainbow Six
SpellcheckAlways chapter 6 . 6/18/2009
This is excelent. A twist with the story. *claps* Nice work. Please continue wen you have the time
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