| Reviews for escape |
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Regit chapter 7 . 12/13/2011 I think that if Garrow would die it would make the story better. |
A Changing Persona chapter 9 . 7/27/2011 That's okay. I understand. There's just so much to do... Anyways, awesome story. I was all like, Erry DIDN'T rescue Arya? Baaaaaadddd! But then, it turned out to be great! And Sparkly! Toodles! |
e1venl0rd chapter 9 . 5/14/2011 Could you please keep writing? This is a wonderful story! |
LOTL Stephanie.L chapter 8 . 8/20/2009 Can't read this. Please paragraph. |
Lalaith Quetzalli chapter 7 . 7/24/2009 Garrow is still alive, that's always a plus. Also, it seems Arya may not be giving Eragon such a hard time with his affections, that's even better. I just hope you won't kill Brom. This makes me want to ask if you're going to rewrite the books, make a complete Au, a bit of both? Also, even if you dn't exactly follow cannon, will you use what we know? (Here I'm talking especially about a very important piece of information we learnt in Brisingr and that could completely transform your story if you chose to use it soon. Anyway, I can't wait for ou to continue this, the story looks so good! |
eikka492 chapter 7 . 7/14/2009 i really don't know what to write, but since you said to review, i guess i have to. anyway, this story quite good, not the worst but not the best either. yet. main thing that would make this story better would be length,'cause i like long stories. still this is a very promising. it's also VERY far away from the original story. Arya escapes herself, Garrow lives, he knows about saphira... etc. etc. but i like it that way. see ya later. Ps sorry my bad english |
sharan chapter 7 . 6/22/2009 hey,please kill wont be what he is[in the origional one]without garrows death |
BetweenTwoWorlds chapter 7 . 6/21/2009 Great job! I really like it! I hope you update soon! |
Xemnas Swan chapter 7 . 6/21/2009 That was surprising! I didn't know Brom was a treaser! Keep going! |
Mini93 chapter 7 . 6/21/2009 Update soon |
DoNotCrush chapter 7 . 6/21/2009 I hit a writer's block. Your lucky you don't have to deal with Jimmy. Btw there is a story behind that. |
Darth Destroyeis chapter 7 . 6/21/2009 Definatly an interesting AU. Can't wait to get another update. Keep up the good work... Lord Darth Destroyeis |
CorLeonis92 chapter 7 . 6/21/2009 i just love this chapter. it was so sweet...especiall in the end when Arya thinks about Eragon... update soon:) bye |
Rainbow Six chapter 7 . 6/20/2009 I personaly believe that Garrow needed to die to make Eragon who he is. ~Rainbow Six |
SpellcheckAlways chapter 6 . 6/18/2009 This is excelent. A twist with the story. *claps* Nice work. Please continue wen you have the time |