Oh my god, I think that everyone who read this story had little pervy thoughts! Oh BTW the warning for yaoi haters, funny! I'm using that one for all my yaoi-hating friends :3

this was very funny . luved it

i was laughing so hard, i read it like five times! its to good!

Lol you had me thinking really pervy thoughts XD

The ending was brilliant! But why is everything underlined...?

This made me laugh quite a bit, which I don't do very often reading fics, so good job. The underlining is a bit irritating though.

"Do you want to go to my house?"

"We live in the same f-cking house, f-cktard!"

LOL. Nice job.

LOT7

w-why was it underlined? TT_TT

Liked to read it, but it... was annoying with the underlining. T_T

Nya, but I laughed xD

*facepalm* Kakuzu...WHY IS TAKING OFF YOUR PANTS NESSESARY?

lol, I laughed so hard! XD

Why exactly is taking his pants off necessary?

lol btw

...thats all I'm going to say

Kakuzu is now as insane as me!

Kakuzu is now as insane as Ashley...

OmJ total lol! new glow in the dark watch! that's so funy! i was totally rotfl! hahahahahahahahaha-ah-ah-ah-ahhe-he-hehahahahahahahaha! uhh...m.

Haha! I love your warning at the beginning.

"Don't like, go play in traffic."

Heh.

Anyway, the story was very funny. I only found one error, and it was just spelling. Your wrote:

"They didn’t notice everyone had -stooped- talking or doing other activities and were watching their exchange intently."

And I'm thinking stooped was suppose to be stopped.

Regardless, I like the twist, and I hope I haven't offended you. :3

XD That made me happy! Kakuzu WOULD do that just to get on Hidan's nerves! You should write another one where Hidan does something similar, to get Kakuzu back!

-WhirledPeace