Argh! Filch caught them! Now what happens?
PS: I favorited this.

Although I kind of said what I wanted to in my last review, I'll tell you now too. I'm interested by the storylines you bring up in this, and the way your characters are developing. I think you throw in these really strong ideas, the Death Eater attack on Alice and Frank and such, but I think they're just melting away, the characters aren't reacting - did the Professors just forget about the attack? They call her a Mudblood a lot, and you mention You-Know-Who's uprising, but I think it would be more of an issue than you're making it, and that's what's holding this back from being a really good story.

That's my crit for you. Sirius and James are both very sexy in this, and you've made Lily into a realistic human being. Well done on that, since most don't. *alerting* as I want to see where you take it next!

(And I know some don't, but I personally like cliff-hanger endings to chapters, so kudos on executing them like you are doing!)

I was going to review at the end, but I just have to say this now: if Sirius was grasping my shoulders and looking at me with a penetrating gaze, I think my stomach turn to smoosh :D

So far, I like how you're doing this and not rushing it. And Sirius is possibly one of the most gorgeous Potter characters, which was really the point of this review!

Wait, what? The chapter had to stop there? PLZ update SOON!:)

I love, love, love, love this story! Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Amazing story, keep it up :D

Such a nice save by James! And I bet Lily was surprised, especially when she had the map!

Ah a full moon. We all know what that means. But its sad that she couldn't tell him how she feels.I knew it was going to happen, though. It always does!

Is Aconite Deletum an OC? I don't recall his name! Its great how Lily speaks up and obviously surprises the Marauders

Aww such a sweet chapter. Finally Lily's showing some feelings towards James. And poor guy's in shock! And Dumbledore would know that James isn't to blame!

I was not expecting this! Hahaha, loved it! It was so in character!

Funny how both of them begin to describe what happened earlier the same way. I wonder what the plan is gonna be! I love it so far!

This is so how I imagined Lily. She would start a water fight with James! Plus, red heads are supposed to have "fiery" tempers

Hehehehe, love how James was "nice" to Lily and how she didn't expect it!

I loved reading more about the Marauders! You wrote their characters very well but I'd love some more Lupin!

I love how your writing fits James and Lily so well! I can imagine them both acting this way in my head!