Above excellent job with this.

I hope to see more very soon.

I love the buildup you have done so far. The Liche idea was and is a great one. I will be waiting for more of your story, for I have loved it so far :)

Up until now, I think this story has been keeping me on my toes :D For each chapter's end is a delicious cliffie :)

And it somehow ties up with Alan's story and all, which seems to promise more

ANd thru this,I think I'm getting a clearer idea of the Monster Zero event and the happening behind the whole event :)