i like your usage of the language.

NICE!

does this have a follow up?

nice story

Thank you so much! This scene NEEDED to happen, whether Tamora Pierce wanted to or not!

i love it!

write more please.

This was really good. I enjoyed reading it, and you stuck to the characters well. The "What gives?" seemed kind of out of place with the time, but it was ok.

thankyou, i was completely angry with the whole dale crap in the bloodhound books. reading page after page and being angry and wondering about rosto. and then at the end of bloodhound we didnt even get to read a convo with rosto and beka. i felt jipped! now i feel better thankyou

you should continue it. this is great. i want to know how it works out

This was awesome. Goob writing the peoples characters!

Oh yes! Why couldn't there have been this reunion in the book! I LOVE IT!

Aw, poor Rosto! :(

It would be nice to see this continued... but it's fine as it is. I personally did like "Chamomile" more, but that's probably just because of Beka and Rosto actually being together. This was very well written; great job!

Continuation? Please? :)

poor Rosto...

AH! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! you can't just leave it like this! Please, MORE! Rosto is the most adorable manly man EVER and Beck needs to get her head outta the clouds on this. By the way, nice kiss! LOVE IT! now, need I repeat myself? Yes. MORE! ;-)

AWESOME please add more

this is awesome! it could totally be a part of the book! beka & rosto are totally in character (dont you hate those fanfics that have character personalities that totally deviate from their REAL character personalities? especially when they make tough girls like beka seem all girly-girly). but you captured them to a T! its awesome. keep writing! hope you make one about daine/numair (my other fave Tortall ship)!