I really liked your story. Thanks :-)

Hilarious

Haha, adorable! Loved it :-)

Really funny, loved it.

Lisette

This was awesomesauce. Great blend of humor and bittersweet!

As Parker would say, HA! Pure genius, seriously. I love it. I'm still giggling. Heehee. Great job!

Love it! Sweet and funny, with lots of great character moments. I loved how Parker pictured the story. Great job!

Oh, the hilarity that ensues...

Wow, loved the creative spin! I have never read a fanfiction like this, I loved it! Thank you for posting even if it was more than a year ago and this review is a little late.

I LOVE their version...but, uh, you you wouldn't be possibly thinking about giving us Eliot's version at some point would you? Purty please with puppy dog eyes? Not the real story, of course (how boring-well, not, actually, but...). Maybe have Eliot explain what happened by doing his "explain an incredibly complicated even in ten sentences of ten words or less each plus a few grunts without actually explaining anything" thing, and have the team translate it from Eliot-language into English for Nate. Because I love, love, love this concept and I really want to see more of it (more watery puppy dog eyes).

Seriously, this was awesome. You got Parker's voice right, which really ought to be impossible. I mean, I've read fics where her voice is right, but it's always when she's in a semi-making sense mood. Which she's cannonically in more often that her not-making-sense-tralalalala moods, but we all love her for the not-making-sense-tralalalala moods, so it's great to see someone writing them. And writing them believable. Which is bizzare because this is total crack. It's just...this is believable realistic crack? Paradoxical. Something like that.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Love it!

Awesome again. I really liked how u didnt come right out and say that Eliot was in the hospital, but left no room for wondering if that was the case. Also thought the parts with Sophie, Hardison and Parker were super funny and IC and a nice juxtaposition with the equally IC but much darker flashback bits. Well done. Nate finally hearing this story is gonna b epic. Haha.

Pj

This was such a great story - I love the way you've told the two stories at the same time. The playfulness between Sophie, Hardison and Parker is just brilliant. I really enjoyed reading this - had a smile the whole time.

Lol, another awesome Leverage fic!

Lots of crazy fun this one, loved the end when we find out Eliot's actually in the room and listening. Nice story, I liked it.