LOL! This was hillarious, leave it two these two to fall into dating and not have a clue! I am so glad I came across this and I don't think they were out of character at all. The humor and banter between them were right on target. I love D/V and this is a real gem! Thanks for making me laugh, great job! :)

Way cute! I loved it!

Oh, my goodness, this is fabulous-I laughed so hard.

Ha! That was great!

Great story! I had a lot of fun reading it

Having these two circling each other and having no idea why...that is simply priceless! Enjoyed seeing a jealous and possessive Daniel in the bar. You can so see his character doing that and being kind of territorial. Had to luv when Vala "finally" had the lightbulb come on...simply fantastic! Well done!;)

this is so great! haha i love it!

very cute. I can see the relationship developing this way without either one realizing it. Daniel is just numb enough and vala isn't familiar with our mores so it would be a fun mix. :D good job!

Loved it...all the characters were at their best!

*sigh* I love. (:

Very cute, and fun, too. Leave it to Daniel to miss the signs of dating, lol, I liked that Mitchell had to clue him in. Well done!

Very funny! I'm laughing quite hard right now!

Lol! This is so adorable! Both Daniel and Vala's complete and utter ignorance is *priceless*. There were so so many perfect lines, but I think this bit near the end was my favorite:

" “Tell you?” He dropped his pen and turned his chair to face her. “Why the hell didn’t you tell me?”

Vala’s eyes widened. “Tell you? How was I supposed to know we’re dating or…whatever you want to call it?”"

Ek! Just made me squee out-loud ;

Also, Jack at the end was perfect.

I really enjoyed it, it was kinda like the

bandade for "Unending"

that was so great, loved it;)