| Reviews for An Oken in the Making |
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   spinmearound chapter 7 . 10/24/2009 that was good. and lol lilly's "wedding" song was funny |
| Hannah Monatana Fan 95 chapter 7 . 8/7/2009 I liked this story- it was cool. No negative comments. :) |
| amandajoyce118 chapter 7 . 7/23/2009 I haven't been reading fanfic lately as much as writing it, but I finally got around to reading your last chapter,and it was great :) I love that you jumped ahead so we could see how their story turned out. I love the whole he's your son, she's your daughter thing at the end. It was so them. Haha :) |
| xOhMyMyFrances chapter 1 . 7/20/2009 I know I'll like it because I liked 10 Reasons I Can't Date Oliver. But 10 Reasons I Can't Date Oliver could've been a little shorter. I mean, the fillers weren't needed. Um, An Oken In The Making is added to my faves. Even though I have only read half the first chapter. TRICDO(the first) I forced myself to read 'cause I got a little bored. Overall :-). -Loliver Fan (even though not in my name) |
| adryrules99 chapter 7 . 7/19/2009 Didnt see so many year jumps coming but I loved them. I love that u gave the twins blonde hair,giving them Lillys looks hahaha ... Good Job! Anything u write next is just dandy |
| CatchTheRainbow chapter 7 . 7/18/2009 I haven't evaporated! So thats a good sign :) I liked this chapter. Great job! Upadate ASAP! :) |
| bluestreaker14 chapter 6 . 7/18/2009 aww! this was so cute! i love that they're still arguing even now. thats what makes them lilly and oliver. ) |
| IheartORANGE chapter 7 . 7/18/2009 It wasn't too choppy, but this was so sweet! I loved how Oliver fainted and how Lilly revealed that she was pregnant, they were perfectly in characte! I'm so happy you wrote a sequel. only question I have: is that all of the kiddos? Great job, Camy! ~Emily |
| TheRightWrongs chapter 6 . 7/12/2009 perfect, both of them just crack me up and their families too. |
| IheartORANGE chapter 6 . 7/8/2009 aw cute! This was amazing...I loved Lilly's craft idea. I also like how Oliver was: I'm allowed my 5 minutes of temporary insanity. You had two days! (or something like that) The ending was great not unsmooth like you thought. Again very nice...I love how motherly the mothers are...well, that sounded lame but I do. Very awesome! GREAT JOB! |
| bluestreaker14 chapter 5 . 7/1/2009 ah! i love it! so cute! this and 10 reasons are probably my fave loliver stories! they're just so good! everything i reviewed about 10 reasons also applies to this one. ) update soon! i need to read more! ) |
| CatchTheRainbow chapter 5 . 6/24/2009 He he. I liked this chapter :) And I'm pretty sure you'll NEVER run out of cheesy titles ;) Great job! Update soon! |
| IheartORANGE chapter 5 . 6/23/2009 I feel the opposite of this chapter...it made me ecstatic reading it, though the chapter name kinda freaked me out until I started reading. I loved the "Son of an Oken." and how you gave insight to how Lilly feels- the I'm going crazy, might as well. And the ending was freaking adorkable! Great job, Camy! ~Emily |
| CatchTheRainbow chapter 4 . 6/20/2009 Drama. That dream was certainly interesting... Katie's back? *Gasps* Dun, dun dun...lol xD Well I wonder what happens now. Great chapter :) Update soon! |
| AColdSky chapter 4 . 6/20/2009 Yay Camy! You should email me. Maybe you did and I haven't checked. Anyway... wot. |
