I love this! U should make more lemons :3

Aww! This is so cute!

cool :3

mew

Oh, Brightheart... Very nicely written, detailed, but not too much so, short, but not too short.

I think it was good just as you said needs to be longer and needs more romance. :)

you know that a cats penis is only 3/4 of an inch long right? plus it has barbs. a lot of barbs. so when cloudtail pulled out... brightheart should of been in pain. oh and cloudtail should of been biting her scruff too.

Aww! That was cute, romantic and to the point. It wasn't smutty or just dirty cat sex like so many others are, it was touching and natural. If you write more stories and want to put 'lemons' (although a more romantic term is needed here) in, make them as sweet as this was, please! You captured their love perfectly :D

This was still good considering how short it was, but I still really like it, you're awesome Natureboy.

Its cool!

I like this pairing :)

Stupi daisy :(

LUBB IT :D

Cute and funny!

this is a nice story! i lik,e it ! fur sum reason it makes me feel all warm n fuzzy inside x3 i suggest a bit mor details tho. wid luv

- goldenfire

Lovin' it!

Hey Rose here. I wanted to ask you something about spiderleg. I know this is way off subject but didn't spiderleg die in sunset because he is in every book sense then. Again totaly off subject but just wondering. I totally LOVE the story. Keep writng stories I think yur really good at it.

Rose

awesomeness! .

Wow make it longer! I love the "catch me"