I really like this story with its unusual character portrayals. I am putting it on follow on the outside chance that someday you will be able to finish it. Thanks for the time and effort you have put into it thus far!
Sue

It sounds like Bella is just looking for attention.

OK IM JUST REALLY GETTING INTO THIS & THEN IT STOPS!? Im not trying to be rude, but that kills me when i start a story & people just let it die by the waste side!

More please?

Beautiful story, I loved Bella. You did a great job at translating the changement in her life, the new hope she is feeling. Thank you so much for sharing this amazing tale.

Hélène

it's good. [arts are hard to follow, but overall it's a good story

Best chapter of them all. This is such an amazing, fabulous fic. I am so sad you haven't finished it. Thanks for sharing.

This story is amazing! I wish you were still writing it! I love the word usage!

Wish you would update someday. This was a one of the best stories I've read. It's so beautiful. Hope you'll get the chance to complete this wonderful story.

I hope you continue this!

I love your portrayal of Esme!

Love this story - you are hilarious. Wish you would continue!

Thanks

I am hooked

Brilliantly irreverent