oh! and please come back and finish this

Interesting concept! I hope Naruto is able to save Hinata, before she does too much damage to him; She'd have a hard time forgiving herself if she truly hurt him. Her depressrion and self anger is gonna be bad enough when the real her discovers what she did to Neji.

Well damn, that was unexpected. Hinata made a contract with sharks, Itachi has a girlfriend, Naruto is learning how to do some wind-type jutsu from Kashi, Sakura can't make good chocolate balls, and Sai is as weird as ever whoever the heck he is.

This was good though, it was. You should have someone beta for you. You've got a few grammatical errors, but its nothing really big. The story itself was really good. I expected it to drag on like most HinataxNaruto stories i've read, but it was really good. It managed to keep my interest which I congratulate you on. I'm surprised i didn't want to stop reading once she got captured.

I really hope they get her back to normal. I don't like seeing this kind of hinata. Update when you can, and thanks for the great read.

holy shiz man, hinata can't become a shark, that would just be too fucking weird. I'm glad Naruto's not all pissed at Itachi and I feel really bad for him. That was a major spoiler about the whole clan thing, but hey, i told you i'd read this and I did. One more chapter, I'll review on that too.

ooh, somewhat of a cliffy. things have gotten interesting. The real hinata is still there, and Naruto almost got to her. I still don't like sasuke though. Glad Orochimaru died. I would comment on other things, but I want to keep reading. This is really good, though I'm not too big on the whole 'i'll kill you cuz i can and i hate the leaf village with a burning passion' hinata, but it adds to it.

well damn. i like the drama, but i want the normal Hinata back.

That didn't actually happen did it? They didn't actually kidnap her and force her to join them right? Ugh! And where the fuck is Naruto? They better get Hinata back soon and her memories-the real ones-returned to her. I like this though, i'll tell you that. Though sadly my head is starting to hurt and I think i'm getting a migraine.

sweet. Did her usuing the water jutsu actually happen or was that all you? They got closer, yay! They're so cute together!

okay that was kinda cool. I apologize ahead of time if I don't review on every chapter, but so far I have. The story is pretty good actually, first one that didn't automatically skip the details of the retreval. I did it, but that's cuz I haven't watched it. Not bad, though you should find someone to beta for you. You used there when you should have used their and a few other things, but nothing too major that I saw.

well damn. And where's Naruto during all this?

I thought it was Shukaku not Shikaku? Shikaku is Shikamaru's father right? Also, it might be better to write what the person says then say they whispered it instead of doing the word in little stars. like.
"I think she's in love with him." white Zetsu whispered.
Or something like that. That's just my opinion and you can ignore it if you wish. Good chapter, more detailed on the extraction than most i've read. most just say the akatsuki caught him and he was screaming his head off. They usually don't explain what things look like around him. Good job on that.

I had forgotten that the hokage had made a rule that no one was to speak about it. I hate reading about this part in the story of Naruto because Gaara dies. Good detailing, even if I am kinda lost.

This one was good too, but I just realized something. If I keep readingthis it will spoil everything for me in Naruto since I haven't seen past the Chunin Exams Arc. I like this story so far, I really do, but I think it's be best for me to watch Naruto fully so I can give a better review on your story. It only seems fair to me that I at least have some idea what's going on so I can tell you what I think. Hope you understand.

that was really good, though i was slightly confused at one point with just who was thinking what. the though of 'great now he's mad at me' i'm not sure if it was Naruto's or Hinata's. Maybe you should tell which p.o.v it's from or something. Maybe it's just me, but i got confused. But it's pretty good, though i'm not a huge fan of third person stories though i've written a few. I just like 'I' and 'me' instead of 'she' 'he' and 'so and so's name' but aside from my own personal problems this was pretty good.

More description. I'm seriously dying to see the chamber she's in. I'm mean dude is it cold warm. Is the bed comfy or what. And when she's screaming don't do dialogue just describe it. Makes everything a hell lot more tense.