Reviews for Small Wonders
AHigherOctave chapter 7 . 10/1/2009
I like tragic Jake/Miley. I think it suits them, they're both very dramatic yet strong characters. And I love the flashback...Especially the end of it. I do want to give Miley a big hug though, because he said he'd protect her heart...

Although, he does try.
TheRightWrongs chapter 7 . 10/1/2009
wow, just wow. this is brilliant! i hate asking this but you could you do a follow up.
TWLOHA Girl 4 Life chapter 6 . 5/30/2009
Whoa. Late review. Sorry.

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Anyway, I was kind of confused at first, and then I read it a few more times and understood it more.

I love your writing. Once again. This was very well written. And quite sad. All the characters seemed...dark. Which I liked.

:]
bizarre-reason chapter 6 . 5/25/2009
I totally forgot to review this earlier, silly me. :)

Anyways, I caught the idea of this prompt, whoo! It was a little confusing at first, I'm not gonna lie, but I finally understood the idea when I finished reading it. xD

I have to say, though, it put me down. I hope that was the message you were trying to get across, if so, then well done. I have to say, I never really pictured Jake as the abusive type, always above that and I try to avoid stories that use that kind of plot, but you wrote it so well.

Of course, Oliver being his donut-self, staying in a relationship with someone he questions his love for, and also the fact that Lilly lives two neighborhoods away. :( Sad drabble, but it was very well-written and I loved it, as usual.

Can't wait for your next prompt!
infinitelonging chapter 6 . 5/18/2009
I caught the prompt :) I was quite proud of myself, actually. I haven't seen Mitchel's video, but I saw the one he recorded with Tiffany Thornton. They're cute.

I think this whole piece kind of depresses me, but that I think was part of the message you were intending to send across, so you should probably take that as a compliment. I am kind of sad because I assume Jake is the one abusing her, and I always pictured him to be above that, but for the purposes of your writing it works. And Oliver is being his doughnut self, trying to stay with his fiancee when he knows it's a waste of time.

Anyways, I can't wait to read the next part. I'm very interested to see what happens next :)
infinitelonging chapter 5 . 5/12/2009
Aw I thought this was cute! You have to admit, Lilly's got to have feelings of inferiority when she's around a famous popstar all the time.

Usually Jackson seems kind of wacky to me, but you made him really likeable. I especially like the last line. It was perfect. :)

You know what would be kind of cool? An oliver/sarah. Just saying :)
bizarre-reason chapter 5 . 5/11/2009
YAY! :) You made it. I just got your message today, thank you. This was really sweet. :D

Jackson is right, Lilly is quite extraordinary. Hehe. I love them, aw.

Haha. I get what you're saying about the whole LillyJackson thing. But thanks for writing it anyways, this was really good. 3
TWLOHA Girl 4 Life chapter 5 . 5/11/2009
AWW.

SO CUTE!

:D

I really do like Jackson/Lilly. I don't know why. I think they'd make a very interesting couple. And I'd never get tired of them.

3

Brilliant one-shot as always.

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TheRightWrongs chapter 5 . 5/11/2009
i like this even though i also don't care for the jackson/lilly pairing. i just pictured someone else in his spot until the end when the stench line came in. great job, can't wait for the next prompt, what is the pairing if you don't mind my asking?
bizarre-reason chapter 4 . 5/8/2009
Haha. That was sweet. :) I could totally see Lilly calling Jake odd and the ending is just too cute for words. You should totally do a Lilly/Jackson one. ;D wink wink. That'd be awesome.
infinitelonging chapter 4 . 5/5/2009
AW! Jake/Lilly is like my OTP. I'm convinced they're going to get together, I don't even know why.

I liked it. It was short, but you got your point across perfectly, and Jake was really sweet, even if he was, as you put it, a little odd.

Can't wait for the next!
TheRightWrongs chapter 4 . 5/4/2009
that is cute! and the ending is fine. i used to like Lilly/Jake too (but never like my love for loliver (: ) until he used her. for some reason though i don't think that lilly would have ever liked him had he not been the zombie slayer. so her love was more fan than crush. but i'm being a downer :(

anyways, this was simply cute and sweet.
AHigherOctave chapter 4 . 5/4/2009
Lilly calling someone else odd. That's funny. I don't think Lilly would even need coffee in the morning, she's such a force of energy. Jake probably would, all the live long day though, dealing with her. I love it, thank you.
TWLOHA Girl 4 Life chapter 4 . 5/4/2009
Aww.

I really like Lilly/Jake.

And I loved the ending. Very sweet.

:D
infinitelonging chapter 3 . 5/3/2009
So, I don't really read a whole lot of HM fanficiton anymore because I'm sick of finding Jobro crossovers, but I am SO GLAD I found this. All of the oneshots are written in this way that is so gripping and ... I don't even know how describe it, but to me it's perfect. :)

I like that you're doing a bunch of pairings, it should be really cool. I'm interested in seeing the next ones, too!
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