Thanks for a great read!

Wow, way to kill yourself and all your little friends too Draco. What a moron. This was super fun even with the lack of explanation on what actually happened to Harry. Did you leave that out on purpose or just not want to specify?

Sheesh, to think that I haven't read this until now...

Nice read indeed. I like!

And as for "The only question left is who will make history by helping this along - and who will be history by opposing it."
That's got to be one of the most brilliant lines I've ever read. If you don't mind, I'll probably steal that to be used in a background story or a game at some point. Word by word or paraphrased. I just love that line!

One word: Nice.

This story is so amazing. And it ends just right to open a whole series. Please, more?

I must've missed it. It's hard to read a 1 chapter 24k long story and not start skimming. What creature is harry

Another good story. I don't think it is quite as well balanced as the one with his daughter getting killed as muggleborn, but that could be mainly because Harri's motivation feels a bit more forced in this one... The whole different magic bit is intriguing though, even with the slightly cliché over laden eye bit included. And Whisky Tango Foxtrott was that epilogue meant to mean? They "recruit" new changelings? Good for them, but isn't that a break with what they planned earlier? To elevate all that have not done anything wrong and build a new society with them while getting the collaborators and criminals of Voldemort's supporting circles away from their magic and the magical society? The cleanup seems to have ended somewhat haphazard and random in that way, a lot more death than initially talked about and a lot less demagicking of those who hurt others for their magic and background or lack of either.

But beyond that all I highly enjoy that you vary your pairings all through your writing. It feels as if there is a better reflection to it than just running with one eversame couple and be done with it.

Great story! Loved how Harri one after another included her friends, dealt with the problems of the British Wizarding World, but more importantly found peace for herself as well again. :)

I love the story concept. :)

This was definitely interesting and I'm glad that I read it. I like how you didn't go out of your way to explain things and left enough things unsaid that you work retelling the story. It seems like you had a plan on what you wanted to say and do with this story and you did just that. you didn't over extrapolate from what I'm assuming was a single idea that you wanted to flesh out. This idea made this story quite good and enjoyable. I also like how you ended it with just enough information and tidbits for the reader to figure out what happens next.

really enjoyed the tale, thanks!

I really hate one shots I won't lie about that your concept for this story was very interesting though. In some ways I wish you had done more with it. In others I would have like you to go further into the relationship of Harry with Gabbi, In others I would have liked it if you had gone a bit further into the whole gender change of Harry. But other wise I have enjoyed this story and I thank you for sharing it with us.

Damn is this nice

You need to rewrite or just get rid of all those damn mistakes in this story. Hermione is a witch not a wizard.

A good read. Not everything is spelled out which gives room for the imagination. While not a completely original plot the take on it is better than most.