I really quite like this story, it's unique in that it doesn't feel like it's just Hitsugaya trailing along with the Golden Trio with the exact same events occuring with just slightly changed dialogue which is absolutely fantastic. I also really like the plot twists that are occuring, they're wonderful. I would love to see more of your writing and this story and it seems that it has been quite some time since you last updated this but even if you don't update it in the future, I would just like to thank you for the lovely writing and story that kept me reading for almost 3 hours straight. It captured my attention and kept me invested which is more than I can say for a lot of published books. So thank you for that.

I am two-minded about your fiction. Your writing style is good, the plotline so far is interesting enough. However, your demonstration of the characters seems... off. Admittedly, Ron can be a bit rude at times, but he is not the mean sort of person. You kinda made it like he outright discriminated agaisnt Hitsugaya. Speaking of Hitsugaya, you seem to not understand the character properly. Sure he can be shorttempered, but he's not one to be rude or condescending towards others. Everytime someone adressed him with his first name, he always got mad and made the temperature drop and whatnot. I mean, I myself is obsessed with formality, but I do not bite someone's head off if they fail to adress me the way I want them to. In the anime, clearly he did not get agitated when Karin and other kids call him 'Toushirou'. Furthermore, Hitsugaya is supposed to be more on the mature side, which means that he should be more calm and collected. I mean, I've been enjoying this story so far but everytime Hitsugaya gets mad because of negligible things, it throws me off. To be honest, he is more like a sissy girl with PMS. If only you fixed this particular problem, it would be splendid.

MOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! THAT IS LITERALLY THE. WORST. CLIFFHANGER. EVER! I NEED YOU TO UPDATE~!
~Kura

Update please please please!

I really enjoyed reading your story, but I'm sad that it's not finished. Are you gonna come back to it some day? Don't leave me hanging here. I really do love this story.

Updates? Are you going to update this? You left it at a cliff hanger!

(Chanting) Up-date! Up-date! Up-date!

The second to last paragraph had me laughing so much!

Please update! I can't handle this cliffhanger!

Totally evil cliffhanger! It's been awhile since your last update, but I'll alert anyway, just in case! Good job, quite fun! Very interesting spin, having Matsumoto there to, well, mess everything up! And VERY interesting spin on the monster of the chamber!

love it

This is... AMAZING!
I love this story and I'm dying to know what will happen next
so please... update this (soon!)
thanks :)

This story is so well thought out I love it to pieces o I do hope you continue it because I'm dying to know what happens next

Mrs. Filch? you certainly mean mrs norris, the cat of filch, right?

anyway, great story, please continue. cant wait to hear what momo wanted to tell hisu-chan

(sorry for my horrible english, not my mother language)

Please! Continue to write! I love this story! Please this is amazing! ヾ(＠ー＠)ノ