I love this, I can't wait to see how your rewrite turns out

(I spent 5 hours (on and off) reading both, ) I was up all night lol.

I'm a little confused here, if Iruni had been at the dark tournament to watch Team Urameshi fight, then obviously she would have known who Hiei was and his connection to Kurama. So why did she warn Kurama that Hiei was stalking him like she didn't already know who he was? Was that all just some elaborate excuse to speak with him and to hopefully eventually get the guys to help her track down her impostor?

I loved this chapter! It made me laugh.

Cute story but you seem to leave the end of it hanging.

Yessss! Make Hiei realize he has competition

I feel like Kurama should feel attracted to her. I mean why shouldn't he? She's super cool, strong, and hot!

Holy crap! That was just chapter 1! Thats amazing

Found this story on a whim..and fell right into love with it (w)
I love the way you write. It kept me completely hooked, I couldnt even put down my phone and stop reading until I was done.

No complaints about the characters either. You kept true to their personalities.
I see you dont update much but I really really hope you find time to write some more. All of your stories sound great.

I did try to read the oc/yusuke one and wasnt a huge fan but would love to see one or that one develop more!

Great story! I loved it!

LOVED IT this pet shark gives this like twenty million fins up! Absolutely amazing :D

You have NOW become one of my favorite stories and author! This pet shark loves indulging herself into your story. Ichi has become one of my favorite warriors. Rather it be he or she :) I love that you didn't just dive into Hiei and Ichi's relationship but instead let it work the way nature intended. This shark gives you two fins up :3

XD he looked up her skirt!

Amazing story, I'm surprised this hadn't gotten anymore reviews!

Amon-Shinpi is an amazing character, I really liked how she's so loyal to her family, and how she does anything and everything to keep her friends and family safe. I got a little annoyed at her arrogance at the start, but I sort of understand that. How many years of her being a respected, renowned ruler, it was only natural to have that sort of confidence.

I like how Iruni and Hiei are so similar to each other! I like their relationship too, it was really cute to see Hiei get so protective of her and how he so obviously liked her even if the both of them didn't know it.

Outstanding job with this story, I will look forward to any other story you put out :)

cool story