You may not like the ending but I do

like

sad and broken

Hum, I like. You could have ratcheted up the intensity, but then again, it'd be higher rated. ;)

Ohhh I loved it! It's so sweet...and sad...but I thought the ending was nice. haha, they're all watching...

Ohh ur story's published on my birthday day last year... XD

LOL! I think the ending was smart and funny. Smart because Jace&Carly NEVER get time alone, and funny because they just walked in seen the two of them didn't really know what to do so they just let them be( I also thought is was cute and sweet ). Right more pretty pretty please with jace on top?

i think it was a very sweet fanfic. good job. it conveyed the right emotions at the right timing. it was good :)

Aw... that was so cute, but so sad. And, it reminds me of the song "Christmas Shoes" for some reason. But, I loved it.

With Love,

Lassemista

this was so beautiful and im sorry but im condradicting your opinion i love the ending

this was beautiful!

I thought that was really fantastic - you did a great job of capturing both of the characters and the song fits perfectly.

Aw! LOVE. THIS. :) totally going onto my fave list. You understand the pairing so well! Great choice of song also, Beyonce is awesome. Keep up the great work!

Loved it write more please. It's ironic really because I was just thinking about how Halo would be a great song to describe their love.

Tiaan Lisse Mar

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I am in love with this story! You have to write more! Please! Like, right now. Haha! That was amazing. I even had the song playing while I read it. It fit perfectly. I love it.

AH! They were all watching! Ha, that's hilarious! But at least they left them alone.

And good job with that story!