Oh this was great! I really like how you took all the emotion and intensity from the scene and put into words in such a fitting way. This made me want to play the game again. Nicely Done!

nice story :) i love the ending: "If Ganondorf laid one finger on Zelda, there would be hell ot pay." LOL so true! xD i love it! good job, It really put a picture in my head, and I love that

GOOD! okay... uh... well, that covers it. AWESOME!

i really like it. it also helps me understand a bit... c ive never actually played LoZ. i learned about her in Super Smash Bros Brawl. then, while looking at an authers profile, i saw a LoZ story. (LoZ on the Jerry Springer Show.) But it (& other LoZ fanfics confused me about Zelda & Sheik. from SSBB i no Sheik is Zeldas alter ego. but it all got so confusing...

do u think u explaina bit? plz?

Nice one-shot! I heart OoT, it's my fav!

LOL: Link slowly walked towards Sheik. "Okay, but what does this have to do with me?"

Ah, I love sarcasm :)

I really like the original dialogue you wrote for Link. It sounds like something he really would have said in the game :) I got butterflies in my stomach when he said, "There's nothing to forgive."

I also thought it was a great idea to have them thrown to the floor during the quaking and then having Link thrown back from her. It was kind of romantic because it showed that Link wouldn't leave her side no matter what. Only Ganondorf's dark magic could force them apart.

You also made Ganondorf more of a slime-ball simply because he said, "She's quite beautiful, isn't she Hero?" So great job with that! :D

Wow, this is really good. You've really got all of the bases covered, and your writing is very good. You applied the game dialogue to your own created actions and thoughts, and you wrote something from OOT. All good things in my book. I'll look forward to good things from you in the future!

-Latent Lullaby

One of my favorite parts! You did a very nice job getting the emotions in there and the characterizing right. I like your style! ;]

Wow :O Awesome oneshot :D ZeLink forever _ Poor Link, I love how you described his desperation, his anguish, or whatever ; If I didn't know better, I'd wish him good luck in kicking Ganon's butt. 'Cept we all know he will, so there's no need for that :innocent smile:

Anywho, great job, loved it, definite fav _

Aw! That was really cute!