| Reviews for In His Soul |
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  Bear39 chapter 51 . 5/14 I hate Angie Chris belong to Bianca. |
 andjelija.nenic chapter 43 . 2/8/2019 Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
| AnimeBook's chapter 12 . 2/5/2019 If this was Melinda's memory then shouldn't have ended when she left the Attic? |
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/23/2019 I love the subtle Star Wars references. |
| AmaraRae chapter 7 . 10/28/2018 who is Amanda? I am soooo confuse |
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/12/2018 That was one of my favorite songs from Hannah Montana |
| dramatv chapter 43 . 5/31/2018 *story |
| dramatv chapter 43 . 5/31/2018 Omg I love this chapter! Very touching emotional, I like how u made the secret out officially and oh their love *sniff sniff* Great strong so far, I enjoy reading it! |
| Dark-Rina chapter 51 . 8/9/2016 Simplemente, me encanto todo de la historia n.n. |
| guest chapter 40 . 2/15/2016 I'm sorry but ... I cannot really explain it but the first 30 or so chapters go okay, then it gets a chore to keep reading. By this chapter, I am skimming and actually forcing myself to try and continue. I am giving up here. I hope you will oneday reread this and find out what is going on here. The concept is acceptable, though a bit repetitive (It is a genre I guess). Something in the wording or even in how you tell it though, can be improved upon by a reread and potential rewrite. I hope you do not mind this, it is not meant as a "flame" or such nonsense, it is intended as criticism and advice and I hope it is received as such. Sorry for the anonymous post, but I do not really see the need to get an author reply to this as it is just a hint of advice. Good luck in further writing endeavours and I am actually sorry I could not bring myself to finishing it nor starting the sequel. |
| mayawene chapter 51 . 2/5/2016 j'aime |
| ThomasNealy chapter 32 . 8/20/2015 This story is really good but if all the errors aren't making a mess of it. The biggest issue is the missing and wrong words. missing or wrong words completely change what is being said. I know this story is complete but you need to go back and reedit it or have someone do it for you. |
| Soccer-Bitch chapter 51 . 12/2/2014 Good story! I enjoyed reading it |
| Guest chapter 23 . 8/19/2014 D |
| Crystalzap chapter 21 . 6/24/2014 that line at the top was from the vampire diaries |
