LOL Okay, I'll review. Calm down, breathe! Lol. Loved it great description and good viewpoint. Keep up the good work:3

I wish it did go farther than pointless sex. Maybe a sequel where it does?

I LOVE IT!

That Was Hot! XD
Loved It! X3

Oh Snap! So Now Snape Is In Love With Harry! Nice! XD

That was epicly hot! oh and i reviewed cuz of the way u said it! "REVIEW GODAMMIT" calm down and breathe...lol good job tho and keep writing.

good job for your first sex scene! Keep up the good work!

MMMMM... i'm thinkn tht i'm starting to like snarry, is tht how u spell it?

keep writing sexy,

Aleksi

for ur first time, its AMAZING! keep it up!

Does writing these make you feel like a perv? 'Cause reading them sure as hell makes ME feel like one. This one was good. I absolutely hate Voldemort related HPSS Fics, and this was both detailed and HOT! Lol, now I feel morelike a perv. Don't stop writing, because you're really good!

Hm...if you aren't opposed to reposting this, I would be happy to edit this for you. Your sentences run-on in some places, and some of the words are used incorrectly. I truly mean no ill-will, but I imagine you might get a better reception from this story if it were a little more, um, legible. And this is of course not something I'm asking to do for money. I've been yelled at before for people thinking I'm being presumptuous and asking for money to help. I hope I'm not being presumptuous, and I don't ask money, I'm just a firm believer in improving on grammar in stories as excellent as this. There are far too many terrible stories for one as well-written as this to go unread because of sentence structure. (And yeah, people do that, I've talked to hundreds of people who stop reading the minute they have trouble reading a story or book, whatever the case may be.) If you pardon how rude I must seem and would like my help, email me at k m ford 1211 at Yahoo dot com.

t'was good.

i like that a lot really fun to read

I think u sounded ilke a pro u should do more cuz i bet the Harry/Severus fans will love it and u and i love the story keep wrighting them! _

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