| Reviews for The Unforgiving |
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Spirit Seer chapter 1 . 6/3 This is very different but a good different. I'm not sure if I've read other "Naruto is banished" stories, but I like that this one took a tragic route and followed that route to the end. Thanks for the intriguing read~ |
Shadow of the Dark Flames chapter 1 . 5/3 Interesting. Atypical. I like stories outside the norm. The ones that surprise me. Other's have done the "Banished Naruto" route. They've had him forgive or seek revenge. This one stands out. Brava |
gh chapter 1 . 4/7 yesssss |
damienfarrar10 chapter 1 . 4/1 This was a great read |
Scarllete chapter 1 . 3/16 I really didn’t expect that ending great story! |
Zanahoriabaila chapter 1 . 1/21 The impersonation is an excellent idea that I hadn't seen before. Full points for that |
MonoSheep chapter 1 . 12/31/2019 I loved the one-shot on the consequences after the village exiled Naruto. I don't know, but I appreciated on how it came to an aftermath. Naruto settled down as a farmer and lived the remainder of his life. Their choices paid their downfall. |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2019 Absolutely perfect. Well done. Also I did like how you made them avoid killing children. |
halleberry1995 chapter 1 . 10/20/2019 Wow powerful and so scary |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2019 They decided to mess with the wrong ninja, too bad they never heard Hogwarts saying of never tickling a sleeping dragon because then maybe they would not have bothered Naruto thus not being demolished... |
MysticRising chapter 1 . 9/27/2019 Now THIS is a ninja, someone who hides in the shadows and doesn't use overtly flashy techniques to do something he could easily do from the shadows, and well if he does said flashy techniques from the shadows it still works! I'm skeptical about naruto being so strong. Like I get it, in shippuden he gets stronger in a few weeks compared to 2/3 years of training with jiraiya (shitty teacher) but it's still a bit jarring to see such independent growth. Well written. Only problem is how sad it is that naruto is all alone. Hope he meets a nice peasant girl and starts a family. |
Dragonfang1917 chapter 2 . 9/19/2019 This is how the naruto-banish-return fics should be... |
Veetu chapter 1 . 5/7/2019 Nice. |
Anonymous Person chapter 1 . 5/5/2019 Geez, that's just scary. |
gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 3/2/2019 J'aime beaucoup. |