hufflepuff duffers tonks "indignantly".
regulus wands got good "senses"

I actually really am enjoying your story. I just think this would take you forever to write if they are going to be reading all 7 books out loud and responding to everything. It will also take as long for you to write all of this as it did for Ms. Rowling to write hers since you have to type everything out again, in bold no less. Not sure what to suggest. Really good responses though

Quite a few changes to the base story, let's see if they make a difference.

Why is there no anger between sev and the mauderers. I don't like this story

I hate the stories where Harry is always the special one. Like Harry gets his nose punched heaps of times but his heals and shapes doesn't. And he has the prettiest blanket of all, Come on. Also he keeps speaking parseltongue.

I love this sort of fanfic! It is amazing and fairly well written!

I like the last option. I mean, it is a good story, but I'd like to see what else you can do with this. Really I just can't wait to see what else you come up with.

Oh good, someone's wising up to the fact that all is not well. Nice chapter, I can't wait to read more!

Ahhh, the machinations of the real world start to take effect again. C'mon, Fate, notice the little things! Poor Harry. Someone please knock some sense into the old coot's head.

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I don't know, but I will say that I liked reading this... a lot. Harry is adorable, Sirius is scarily insane, James and Lily are wonderfully protective, Lucius is intimidating, and I like them all just as they are. (I didn't feel like typing everything I liked about the characters). I have a question? Is Harry going to break it off with the annoying Weaslette? Is it going to be a Draco/Harry/Hermione? That'd be cute. Is Sirius going to join James and Lily? That'd be hot.

It's good, but a lot of people's characters are quite a bit off...

I thought it was lemon drops not lemon sherbet

Hey! I dont really care if u update or not but you gotta tell me what's up with Lucius ,narrcissa and sev!

please update soon :D hope your writingblock dispeares soon ;)