interesting! this is pretty cool!

I don't exactly think that Dudley deserved a seventy five percent.

hahaha love it - how did you get the different font colours?

The teacher should have read between the lines a bit better.

O.O different colors... WE CAN WRITE FANFICS IN DIFFERENT COLORS AND FONTS!?

How do you get your Text like that?! I like the way you wrote this, very good!

It's alright but, it just gets on my nerves a bit that dudley lies so much when he's this young. Plus he makes poor harry sound like a real jerk. but thats not true, he's the real jerk. you should do an epilogue where the teacher speaks to harry or talks to the dursleys. It wasn't the best but it was alright. I mean, "a fine cut figure and am popular with my peers," "Harry’s skinny, bitter, and friendless," ooh it makes me want to throttle him for saying that, even if he is a great bullying prat and deserves sympathy for his lack of brains.

i think he should have gotten a lower grade. but it was a cute story. later dude

Very original idea! I loved it!

haha this is cute. I love it!

heh, this was intersting. You should make another chapter where Dudley has anotehr detention and has to write about Harry again. _ Good job.

-Akua-

I could see Dudley writing that! Very creative.

Thanks for sharing.

Randi

Interesting. Cool to see it through Dudley's point of view!

That's a really creative. I love the way Dudley exaggerated. I'm just REALLY amazed at one thing: Dudley's vocabulary. *puts on lab coat, studies Dudley's pea-size brain under a microscope* Amazing...absolutely amazing...all those words can fit in just this little thing? Unbelievable...Oh! And look here! Half the brain is dedicated to telling lies! How surprising! *looks up, fixes glasses* Oh, sorry...great story, anyway. I love it, it's so creative!

I love Dudley stories, even though he isn't even recognized as I character on .
This was funny;)