| Reviews for Of Little Faith |
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Guest chapter 1 . 5/30 Yv |
Guest chapter 25 . 5/30 Hr |
Guest chapter 17 . 5/30 Ga |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/30 Tk |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/30 Tu |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/30 Id |
Matiky chapter 50 . 5/14 wow even after 180k i was still hoping for more, lol. very cool premise. your description intrigued me and i did not expect a literal Little Faith to be the biggest piece to this story. it was cute and heartbreaking to have Little Faith be the sort of lens everyone in the Scooby gang realized how hurt and vulnerable Faith was. the only two critiques i wanted to offer- 1) a lot of the dialogue repetition, though realistic when dealing w/ a young child and such a magical circumstance, really bogged down some of these chapters. if you could've selected a few scenes to go into that level of detail and then find some creative way to summarize or 'montage' the others would've made the story flow better. 2) i get the focus of the story was Little Faith, but i really wanted a touch more of actual Faith. definitely not like a full resolve of her issues (that could be a whole other sequel), but i was hoping to get a bit more of Faith dealing w/ what she remembered as Little Faith and how Buffy at least tried to welcome her back / make ammends. overall it was an entertaining read. thanks for sharing! |
Guest chapter 50 . 2/1 I would live a continuation of this |
Evey Ankh chapter 2 . 8/14/2019 It would be nice to continue, so we know what comes next. |
Evey Ankh chapter 50 . 8/14/2019 So beautiful |
Guest chapter 50 . 7/11/2018 This might be the best fanfic ive ever read. Im usually bored by the last chapter but this kept my interest til the end. Gonna go check out the rest of ur stuff |
Guest chapter 31 . 7/8/2018 Anya never irritated me as much as in this story. Normally I find her funny but this one is irritating and not even funny. When Willow killed Warren she did it even more cruel than Faith did. She skinned him alive. Faith and Willow are both criminals and both dangerous when they lose control. I don't like Xander but this Xander is sweet. Giles is a fool and Riley well he is the same, just plain stupid. Stopped reading after this chapter. |
Firedawn'd chapter 50 . 5/28/2018 Amazing. This is simply amazing. I binge-read this for two days, and wow. Such a beautiful story, I'm glad you didn't go down the B/F route and kept it as it were. Don't get me wrong, I ship them, but this. THIS feels like how it should be. Thank you for writing. :) |
annaroan chapter 1 . 8/19/2017 Great story! You have a gift for writing really good childish dialog ️ |
Lezzinbout chapter 50 . 6/27/2017 Loved this. Perfect, beautiful work of art. I cried, more than once. Brava |