awwwww I loved it! And it's so funny!

Oh my God, I just loved it... Ayame is a funny idiot XD
I want to tell you a lot of things, but I don't speak english very well :( I loved Ayame and Hatori and I remember that part of Kakeru in the hospital hahaha
The characters are corrects with the manga, I think that they are alike and fit very well. I loved Yuki and Machi episodes in this story and the other (Flury, I think?)
Anyway, thank you for this! I loved ir!

hhahahahahahahahahaha WOWthis story is hilarious! I love it!

Lovely kiss.
I like that Ayame showed up. He was able to see his brother's first love...what a splendorous moment.

Yeah, Yuki was most certainly not joking about not being able to cook. But I would say the fire was still kind of Kakeru's fault for forcing Yuki into it.

the ending was really sweet. thank you for writing a squel to flurry :)

Oh my gosh. I read both stories and I have only 1 thing to say.

Remark about yuki being a girl - PUNCH IN THE FACE! Freakin amazing dude _ ROFL

YES! AYAME MAKES EVERYTHING BETTER! XD Love this! XD i would so picture ayame doing that to Yuki! lol

Ayaa! That was so cute! Haha, I love Yuki and Machi! You got Kimi and Nao-chan, like, perfect! And, of course, Kakeru was just amazazing! I love it when Ayame bursts in with his overconfident self! Aw, I really just L-O-V-E-D that. XD

I've always loved Machi and Yuki's elationship the most when Ayame is involved LOL. I LOVED it! Great story!

~Lovinging-er

I laughed at all the antics of the Student Council. You write them really well! My favorite line is, "Machi felt like she was trapped in a vortex of pure chaos." because that is the perfect way to describe the council! The ending was a bit cheesy, but nothing major.

I want a 3rd story!

UWAH!

I'm such a Yuki/Machi fan so I instantly love this story! I'm so happy I stumbled upon it!

One of my favorite moments was when Yuki says 'stupid cat' in his sleep. It seems almost like it is a a reaction now, he says it without thinking, and so I loved it.

So cute. Good job! _

Sachi-chan

oh my gosh-ness! that was so awesome! and so cute!

I liked that very very much. It wasn't pure fluff - so a review like, "Aww that was like so cute I luv your story!" would SO not do this justice.

First of all I really like Machi's quiet character that was captured perfectly. Even though she's the protagonist she doesn't show up in dialogue or mentioning as much as other louder characters, but when she does she really means it. So she appears very taciturn but sincere; I love her character.

THere were moments I liked - like when Ayame came and Yuki's words were bolded, sort of like in the manga? I think, and like even in his sleep Yuki manages to retort back to Kyo in "Stupid cat."

Your story was very believable :)

hersa - (remember me? I'm your friend on livejournal :)