Reviews for Three Observations
Beawild chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
That was a lot of fun. You should write a similar story from Tom's point of view. How did it feel to be in Janeway's body? He probably spent most of the time touching "himself". LOL!
hester4418 chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
That was hilarious! And very cleverly executed, too, with the limited time frame there was to work with. Comparing sizes... *snort*
Her veiled admission of love was sweet, his open reply even more so.
If you ever decide to move beyond the confines of canon, I'd love to see a sequel! :-)
pumpkin314159 chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
The identity confusion at the beginning is very well done, though I wish you had elaborated more about the failures of language. Janeway's admission about her observations was very well done.
Kerry J chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
Too funny for words! It was great fun to read how it slowly dawned on Chakotay what Janeway had actually admitted and how she then pretended she had no idea what he was talking about. :D But I absolutely loved how Chakotay's casual admission got her attention and probably wiped a smug grin off her face.
imnotacommittee chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
Well, I was expecting to laugh aloud, which I did. But I was not expecting to have my heart melt a little. How did you do that?

I, too, think that they'd engage in some fun flirtation, and only Chakotay could ask such questions. I love the mental image of his eyes twinkling as Kathryn got all flustered about the things she noticed about being in man's body.

The declaration of love surprised me as much as it did them. That was really sweet.
822236 chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
Chakotay's fire hose reference gave me a chuckle
Cerulean.Phoenix7 chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
What a delightful story! I really enjoyed the banter between Janeway and Chakotay, and the comment about "garden hoses and fire hoses" was hilarious XD

I'm really glad that I stumbled across this, because I've always wondered what happened while Janeway was in Tom's body, so thank you for providing some insight into that.

Well done :)

CP7
muuski chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
That was hilarious! I was laughing so hard I accidentally smacked myself in the face.
CKLizzy chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
*grins like an idiot*
Oh I so have to re-watch the episode... it's been a while :D
Great episode addition. You captured them, as always, very well. I in fact can imagine Chakotay asking something like that. Hell, I can see the whole scene happening, because you described it so perfectly. Considering all their banter and flirting when they were alone... it's not that unlikely...
TrekGames23 chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
I absolutely loved it! I giggled the entire time I was reading it -
Kamai6 chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
Thats funny!

Well Done!

Kamai6
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
Brilliant story! I really enjoyed it! Perfect!
Keaton Bridges chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Pure enjoyment! I know your feelings on writing them together in the DQ, so may I just say, bravo! Oh, and thank you.
theshipperlogs chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
Funny and sweet and all Janeway and Chakotay...just how I like my fic!
allie34 chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
As always I enjoyed reading your latest story, please keep writing JC stories!
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