WOW! REALLY GOOD! Me and my friend were reading this and acting it out (I was Jemima) and we really enjoyed this. Also the guest account 'victoria plato', YOU NEED TO CALM DOWN! It's a story.

GOOD JOB TO AlwaysNotUpdating!

I HATE MUNKUSTRAP I HATE MUNKUSTRAP I HATE MUNKUSTRAP I HATE MUNKUSTRAP. HHHHHAAAAAATTTTTTTEEEEEE

I love it. I love the idea of cats too :3 I love cats and I love unique love stories!

WHY? Why did you have to kill them? I loved the story and I loved that they died for what they believe. I myself am a lesbian and I would have done the same thing that Victoria and Jemima did. I also like how you somewhat kept to the musical which I admire. Thank you for a great story and I hope to read more from you.

I agree with Victoria Plato. I am not saying it is really bad, readers who enjoy slash pairing would really enjoy this story. The ending was really confusing. How did Jemima and Victoria die? This is just not the kind of story for me. To tell you the truth i really hate any girl/girl or boy/boy pairings in cats. You never see the cats act that way with each other in the movie or play. I would have enjoyed it better if it was involving different characters. I liked it since it drove my best friend crazy, not really for the story itself. I think it is a really good story for those enjoy slash pairings just not me.

WAT THE HECK WERE U THINKING! u r so perverted! do u think about these things on a normal basis! u r sick minded!

Holy shitaki mushrooms! That was... intense. E... very scary and dramatic. Very, very cool.

This is an unusual couple, most femslash out there is about BombalurinaXDemeter but I enjoyed the story. Are you on youtube, I think I saw someone with the same username on there creating cats video?

This story is absolutely brilliant.

When a story has such a deep meaning, is so well written and is able to actually make me cry, then it's truly an amazing story. I applaud you.

I am openly bisexual and this story really realistic. This story will truly stay in my mind.

AAH! i don't know why i didn't get an email saying it was up! sorry. I'm crying :'( that was such a good ending, well... it was horrible that they died, but it was an amazing way to end the story. i kinda guessed that was coming when you said "maybe i should kill off more characters". i'm mad at munk now. anyway, you are an amazing writer and should never stop!

So sad...I cried. I thought the pairing was a bit odd becuz I always thought it would be Jem and Etcetera but I gave it a try and I liked it. Altho there was to much singing for my taste but I love taTu. Jemima was a little too weak in my opinion and cried an aweful lot. I just expected her to be a bit stronger. Lovely story tho.

Hey, I definately enjoyed this story, thanks for writing it! I think that it sounded a bit over-dramatic and a bit more rushed near the end, alot more after you continued the story... but I really liked your closing line "...look, the sky is crying for us." think you got a taste for tragedy :)

...Kinda cheesey. REALLY cheesey. It's a good idea, but I think it could have been done a little better, with a little more work to it. But ugh, seriously, I would have taken the time skips over the flashbacks, I won't lie about that - flashbacking is lazy writing, and VERY annoying.

Otherwise, nice idea, gotta love Vic/Jem. Keep writing, for you're sure to get better with practice and thought.

Promethius out.

Oh me.

Sadsadsad.

Then again, not all stories have happy endings! I loved all of it till the very end. Thanks for doing such a masterpiece.

This is great , i think you captured the struggles that go on realisticly without it bein overdramtic or boring , a great story all in all .

Marcus