You should try and update

Please continue I wanna see where this goes

Please update soon.

Like this story so update soon!

O.O MORE PLZ

whens the next chapter comin

please tell me you are going to continue this story because i want to see naruto help chrome fight the varia (and fall in love)

i love the idea please continue

Cliff-hanger my ass! Its only a cliff-hanger if you ever update it!

More? Please? O_O

Awwe..(-/,/-) ... I hate cliff hanger! Meh Sasu-teme.. Cool fic! Ne ne will dis be yaoi? (pls say yes) Kyuubi's personality..lolz I love! Haha saying ' so ur gay' hahaha

Update soon pls! I can't wait to read more!

Ja ne

intersting

hey, i read this because i've recently became interested in KHR crossed with Naruto, and i've got a few suggestions to improve your writing. This first would be for you to try to avoid having such large slabs of writing all grouped together - it makes my eyes hurt trying to pick which line i was looking at. Just space it out a bit. Another tip would be not to write "cliffhanger" at the bottom of the text, if it's a cliffhanger your readers will generally clue into that on their own, and complain about it until the next update (take it from someone who knows). I hope those hints help you, i'm not doing this in a mean-spirited attempt to stop your writing - i like potential stories, and there aren't very many in this section, so i just wanted to help you improve your style.

you need have the POV be from the narrators view point, no offense but what your doing doesn't work and brakes the flow of the story.