LOL I like stabby things! Sounds so Jayne. And I like how his true love is Vera.

Genius. Sheer genius. I thought this story was hilarious! I'm very impressed. :D I had a time trying to decipher Jayne's writing, tho, since his vocabulary seemed to consist of a lot of... To put it in Jayne terms, 'stuff'. XD excellent job!

Heee! I love Simon's response to what Jayne wrote!

*Teehee* Brilliant! Absolute, pure genius. XD

Wow, I like this! i know it's been a year, but can you write just a little more? Please?

This is Awesome! The last line totally gets me. Well done! :D

Love it especially Rivers bit :)

extremely funny and river's entry in simon's journal was absolutely perfect

great job

...*dies laughing* R-River, you little-! (And this is the second fan-fiction within the hour that says that Jayne has an affair with Vera. Maybe there's some truth to that, lol)

...No, seriously, River. I also await emotional response.

This is fantastic! River's entry was brilliant, made me laugh very hard. Good job :)

lol river! that was hilarious. spot on with the characters. very well done

You definitely had me going with the Vera thing! I was thinking, "What? Jayne would never date a woman, or show her off on his arm, or always love her..." And then the "My Vera" came and it just made sense. That was fantastic, and creative!

Simon's entry was en pointe with his character, and this line made me laugh for a solid minute straight: "What I could decipher out of the poor grammar is a love affair with one of his weapons. Hardly surprising, but I do hope I don't need to tend any, shall we say 'compromising' bullet wounds any time soon."

And of course, then came River's entry. You nailed her character's empirical note-taking style in just three sentences, which is a feat in and of itself, and I can only imagine Jayne's "emotional response" when he realizes his guns have been dismantled.

Good work!

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