Well, now it's confirmed: Makoto is just too damn desirable! XD

Anyway, on to the review. I agree your English could use improvement, but considering your location I won't hold it against you. In some countries, learning English is a lot easier than where you live, I assume.

Makoto was definitely out of character here - she's definitely not a player - but I still enjoyed seeing her mess around. Especially the scenes at Lake Garden were hilarious! I can totally imagine her orbid thoughts at that time. 'Well, I'll be dead soon anyway, might as well enjoy it.' Lol!

One final note: you do realize Rei's grandpa is going to have a heart attack because of that ticket? I hope you know what you've done. XD

Ja ne!

it seems like a good story but I noticed a lot of errors with the sentense structure, order of words SV agreement.

maybe you should spell and grammar check your chapters before posting them. this can really help in the future. I only say this because I made similar errors in some of my stories. but it is a good story and I like it. _

Wow! Well done! This is the best story I ever read. The ending part between Mako/Rei was so cute. I'm glad that Makoto chosed Rei over Ami and Minako. Awsome story and thanks for the final update!

So sad that this is the last chapter. This story is really good, you just need to pay attention to th grammar.

Yah! Mako-chan chose Rei-chan *victory dance*

I loved the last pic... OMG it looks like Makoto has her hand on Reis butt lol

I think I died and went to heaven!

YAY MAKOTOXREI!

Really good fic! I really liked it thank you! Your drawings are so good too! :)

wow Makoto chose Rei p.I loved this story.

Aw! It's so cute!

I guess I hadn't expected Mako to choose Rei, but hey! I love it anyways!

Wow! Thoses girls seemed really pissed off, after what they almost did to Jupiter. I can't beileve Jupiter loves all three of them. This is very surpiseing. Hopefully the three can learn to share Makoto. This is a great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. Awsome job!

Wow!

Hahah! Another good chapter! I was laughing all the time "Bobobo" youma!

I really like this fic! Please update soon! It is really good!

Ouch! This must hurt.. alot!

Oh no! What will happen with Mako-chan?

I love when the characters suffer...lol

Great job!Hey, when you finish this story you really should do a comics about it. It would be awesome with your amazing skills.

Hahahaha!

Oh god... poor Mako-chan...

lol Makoto is trouble now. Can't wait for the new chapter. Nice drawings by the way.

hahahaha...dang it so what will happen now...oh man that was funny really funny...

but seriously, everything will change for them now... i hope Makochan won't lose them all...

i can't wait for the next chapter...

Wow, those pictures were great. I'm impressed. Yeah, this site doesn't allow you to post links to other sites, so the way you did it is the only way to go. I'm following your story, but I gotta say it's very hard to read with the rough and broken english. Maybe you should try to find a beta reader. You know, someone to read through your story & smooth out the rough spots. Just a thought.