This was truly great:)

Wow .. so beautiful. Loved the concept and the way it told the story of their friendship. Loved it.

Oh, this is really beautiful. I really like how you use the whole theme of walking to have Zuko and Toph readdress/reaffirm their relationship. And they both sound very in-character! Well done!

Interesting writing in first person and I really feel you've captured Toph's character. The only problem I have with this is I feel Toph's 'sight' should be clearer. She'd have to be pretty precise if she can tell when people are lying through their vibrations.

Toko friendships own, and you wrote this well.

“Of course. We’re at war. I can't move faster than someone else on my team or I’ll be defeated. You can't move slower than someone else on your team or they’ll be defeated. If we can move together as a team, no one will be defeated but our enemies.”

OH GAWD ALLY! THAT WAS A REMARKABLE SENTENCE.

"We continued forcing our way through the wind, each of us matching the other’s stride and finding comfort in the knowledge that the other was there. War happened. People divided; friendships were lost. People walked too fast or too slow because of their differences, but others found the strength to walk as a team. Most people walk together because they’re alike. We walk together because we’re different."

*dies of happiness* Just, just beautiful. I loved it. I AM IN LOVE WITH IT. I would make babies with - okay, you know what, I'm getting a little carried away. I loved this. Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful!

Really nice details by the way (I wonder who helped you edit this?). Actions matched perfectly, smooth flow and rhythym. Very in character, love Toph dearly because of this fic.

... I could have sworn I read this before.

Your edits were perfect. Very in character, something I've learned to do from you, and you always end with a powerful and profound sentence.

Zuko is such a softy, getting upset just because he accurately turns words around like that. Nice second chapter, I think.

It is surprising that Toph doesn't get more people pissed off with her careless manner of speaking. Quite well portrayed for Zuko to get so upset, I would say. Well done on the first chapter.

That was a really cute story ;D I really liked it, you're a very good writer. And I had never really thought about that concept before.

Keep up the good work!