Aww! a very sweet story!

Wonderful one shot...you took it from the beginning to present. I hope that soon they will speak to each other and make it official...take it a step further than the holding hands of chapter #615...maybe soon:)

I first read this well over a year ago, and since then, I can honestly said I read this at least one a week from my phone. This is such a beautiful and realistic fanfic, that I damn near cry every time. I thank you for writing such an emotional piece that even as I grow older and eventually leave this site to persue my own life and dreams, this is one of the few readings that I will likely keep with me for a very long time. I know I might sound too attached, and to a Naruto fanfic at that, but this is where I started my writing, and even if I never return here, my heart will hold a place for this site...and DAMMIT THIS FIC DOESN'T HAVE ENOUGH REVIEWS!

nice

This fanfic brought tears to my eyes! So well spoken and told of the love between naruto and hinata. I truly believe in my heart that naruto will one day return hinata's love.

Aw, this is a very in character (and cute) take on Hinata's devotion. I enjoyed it very much~

Though I do have to point out one thing-

Strength filled her, her strikes moving swiftly. Strength and something else, she wondered if this was courage, wondered if this is what it felt like to be worth something. His gaze enough to make her feel like she could accomplish anything if she tried. When he looked at her...

She fell. Her cousin’s strikes too much.

This paragraph is a bit unwieldy. It feels like it's missing a few 'weres' The tense change may have been intentional, but it kind of breaks the flow. Her cousin's strikes were too much would be a more coherent take on this.

By far the best interpretation of all the things that could've crossed Hinata's mind in such pivotal moments in her life. Very well-written. :D

Let us all shout our Naruhina joy to the world. Aw god I am so corny, whatever. That happens when your fan girl fantasies come true.

Love this fic ,

Not at all random and nonsense like the others.

nice story!

OK, if you didn't write this, why did you post it...?

That was really good! X3

I thought your characterization of Hinata was spot on. This was a really cute, and well-done piece. I enjoyed reading it.

Utter sweetness.

aw simple and sweet!

Beautiful perspective through Hinata's eyes. I like how you show her growth from nothing to something. Very nice transition and very well written. I loved it.

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