I adored this oneshot / poem. I have this entire mindset that Tess isn't happy with who she is on the outside... this matched it to a tee. "Your lies are the only way to survive" I loved this line, it hit the entire thing home. Awesome writing!

Caitlin(:

This is one of the best things I've ever read in my entire life.I especially love one line which is''your flesh sparkles but your soul is covered in scars''.That quote describes me so well.

Aww. That was fantastic as usual! Four more fics until I'm done :) And then tomorrow I'll send you a message that'll make your day. It better xD

I sure came here because I've read about your writing style. It's really awesome. There's reality, simplicity, imagination and more than that, the true characteristic of a real writer. I also don't know where that came from but that's what I think. You can create gold out of pure soil. This is really good!

Thanks for sharing your works with us:)

I keep finding all these fantastic authors that make me feel ridiculously inadequate-and I can already tell you're going to be one of them.

On a happier note, I kinda loved this. Just kinda, you know. :P

"What you want destroys you

What you need betrays you"

That was my favorite bit. So simple, and yet I don't know how you could've put it better. This was one of the most descriptive things I've read, and yet it was also in so few words. That's something I'll never be able to do-but I'll always love to read. :)

Love, Cami

P.S. I'll probably end up spending the whole afternoon reading millions of your one-shots now. Agh.

P.P.S. Thank you Starbucks, the MMCAs, and your exbff.

wow. that was, like, amazing. seriously. it made me want to kill myself, which is AWESOME, cuz it's angsty. wow, that honestly stirred up major emotion in me, im not gonna lie. i love your fics...they are just so opposite you, which is cool. shows you are a very good writer. anyways, yeah. sorry about exbffs...they can be a pain, trust me, i know...heh, okay. i have nothing else constructive to say. uh, i ate pecan ice cream for the first time today, and it was AMAZING. i thought i would hate it, but i love it. and i ran all the way from my friends house to my house (a long way..darks alleyways) it was dangerous, but it's all good. makes for a good story. i always have to take stupid dares...meh.

okay, well, i should go...uhm, the lines "What you want destroys you" "What you need betrays you" really got to me...just thought i'd share...alright, later.

this is pretty. i like yuor poetry-style of writing, and i'm glad you wrote some more.

also sorry it took so long to review this. i read it but just didn't review it because i felt like crap. actually, wanted to tell you i'm probably going to be mia for a little bit. not sure how long... could be a week could be a month, idk. just a lot of stuff going on in my life and i don't have the energy or the will to write or review or talk.

i have one basically finished chapter of twisted that i might post, depending on if i think it sucks too much, but i think that might be it for a while. but i'm known to change my mind.

this truly is beautiful, bonnie. keep writing, because i promise i will read it. and i'll try to review.

britt

I really have to hand it to you. Everytime, you have a different viewpoint on Tess angst. But I must say, this theme of rotting is a pretty fantastic take on tess angst. The whole idea of rotting inside but sparkling on the outside it both repulsive and beautiful at the same time. Great job. :)

Oh my. This was very... very tragic. In a good way. If ever there was. :] You know what I mean, hopefully. I have no idea how to explain this story... And yet I love it. It's kinda... strange, you know? I dunno what I'm saying. Oh well. Bottom line - awesome, love it, never stop. :]

O.M.G. Oh, wow, Bonnie, this is just... wow. I'm not even kidding, this Tess-angst has been one of your best ever. I'm effing serious, it's so intense.

Every one of those lines gave me a powerful punch. It's that angsty and wonderful.

This is what perfect Tess-angst should be.

-Kana

Your Tess angst is the absolute best! It's so intruiging to read and it really inspires me to write. I love it!

Oh, Bonnie. This was tragical.

I feel like I can relate to this on so many levels, and it's amazing how your writing always seems to do that to me.

I feel like it's really profound.

I'm sorry you were so tired and stressed, but you created a beautiful little story!

One of my new favorites.

*teartear*

Omg, Bonnie!

I'm so amazed at this wonderful piece you've done.

Tess's character is so angsty!

And you always have the perfect oneshots for this girl.

I LOVE YOU! Write more oneshots so I can read them over and over again in awe.

Again, as usual, I totally love it. So tragically beautiful. Your amazing, the way you capture it so perfectly.

Is it crazy that I feel so sorry for the Tess that you write in these stories, and yet part of me still wants to be her?