How original he said sarcastically

that was good keep the chapters coming

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i am starting to dislike your story more and more for each chapter that pass.
You are rushing the story incredible fast forward and thats only the minor problem wich leads to the huge problem. I dont mind you rushing or naruto being overpowered, but when you rush the story so fast like you do you tend to ignore some important facts, wich is the annoying part, wich makes me hate the story.

It is the part where all your characters semingly know evrything about the other character when they have just meet and just comply with and give the character what they want. No questions about about motives or anything, and how does the kage know naruto will become a biju when he never even mentioned it before? And thats just a few things, i dont mind you rushing past orochimaru, and all that as i can understand the want for a timeskip.
To put it simply, i belive you are slowly destroying the story from the point after orochi, You could add a bit more to it then you allready have, slow down a bit and a bit better job.

All in all, Good Luck With The Story.

continue to update

"Of course I talk human… where do you think your pitiful race learned language from. Surely you didn't believe such a naïve little species as yours could invent something so complex did you?"

I really hope this isn't some pro-demon wankfest. Characters like that are really annoying.

You know what this story is super I don't understand why you stop writing it. I mean he Idea is good the fights are good and the whole story is good. But you could have assume wake up jet he would become another sage for Kumo and gain the same power as Naruto he should have the Hawk summoning contact and naruto the fox contact.

Don't quit the story please :)? For us for the readers :)
Hope you'll answer me :)

hey your doin real good so far

Love!

ppl like sharingan, its that simple. ok well other than that have u actually eaten a zucchini omlette?

You took the introduction part of the first day at his job from "G.I Jane" didn't u? or was it the navy seal bootcamp policy?

I thought you said Naruto's eyes are always will be "ON" i mean Sharingan..

more

plez

more

plez !

if u keep up the good work, add a few more chapters(and a lot more words), stop constantly switching font then u've a perfect story! Anywayyyyyyyyyy how come Sakura like es naruto now? In the anime(and mayb manga dont no haven't read) over the time that sasukes gone Sakura is able to think straight and concentrate on being a shinobi and thanks to being able to think straight and naruto being there to comfort her Sakura grew to have a crush on Naruto but he wasn't exactly there so how?

nice story, keep updating, but why is the whole chapter underlined?