Lily dieing in Miley's arms was both very touching and emotional. The way that you captured both of their emotions was excellent. All in all great story.

just found your story and printed can't wait to read it b4 bed is this based off the yellowcaed song? love that song.

Great ending, So Sad, but well done :).

Ok you just made me cry I did not need to cry but it was so beautiful and sad all at once she died on top of Miley! After they kissed! I am still crying as I write this I cried all the way from the begigning to end.

Awesome finish. I thought the songs were very appropriate, and I love how Lilly left this world in the arms of Miley, on the beach. It was perfect. In my mind, I picture Lilly and Miley's mom together, patiently waiting for Miley to come home :). Thanks for writing this special story. Keep up the good work.

Good story, very sad, but good :).

Ok beautiful but still sad man I think Lily is going to be dead in the moarning.

Excellent job. I really loved this chapter. You managed to portray their love and devotion to each other extremely well. The fact that it was set in a tree house just added to the atmosphere. Keep up the good work. Update soon.

Great chapter. Oliver is such a great friend. I can't wait to read the nights activities. Keep up the good work. Update soon.

Ok this is still sad but I can't wait to continue reading.

Awesome start. Very sad, but I love that Lilly wants to make her last time on earth about Miley and herself. Keep up the good work. Update soon.

aww this sounds really sad :(