Nuu! Tis...over? That soon?

Aww.

It was a nice story though. Real sweet.

But...maybe you might wanna proofread it? Lots of spelling stuff and words where they shouldn't be or not even where they should be.

Great...now I feel horrible for getting on to someone about grammar. I'm not the grammar police-_-...

...damn

Sincerely,

-The Negotiator of Promise

Nuu! Now there's nothing to read for the time being.

Bah! I keep reading Hanataro as Hantaro. Makes him sound like the hamster from Hamtaro. (personal problem)

Omg! Fic idea! Hanataro is...a hamster!

LOL. I wouldn't do that to the poor guy. Besides. I got too many fics to write as it is.

Sincerely,

-The Negotiator of Promise

Aw. So cute

Sincerely, with the shortest review she has ever written,

-The Negotiator of Promise

I-I've never written a review that short before! I-I'm sorry T_T

Rangiku is sneaky?

Scary.

Hmm...for some reason I feel it would be rather akward doing paperworkalone in a room with Captain Hitsugaya. Regardless of if there was conversation. He just strikes me as that type. He has a rather 'cool' and 'icy' personality.

XD very very bad puns, yes I know

Seems good so far. Gonna read more!

But...if I could make a few suggestions?

A) you may wanna check your tenses. In many places, to use an example, you added an -ed when it was not needed

B) though it is a reader insert story, I don't think you need to put (y/e) every time that pops up. Maybe instead put in a nickname that people call the reader/character. That way it doesn't get confusing, as it could in the long run. This goes as well for facial features, such as the (e/c) or whatever it was you used. Just make something up I guess. Doesn't have to be exactly like the reader.

These are just suggestions though or opinions. Whatever ya wanna call them.

Please don't pelt me with soul candy. I hate correcting people and making suggestions for their stories. Makes me feel like a jerk. Please don't hurt me!

aw, so cute ;) cant wait for the next update!