Not what I expected when I read the title "Project Edward" but it was a good story. I really thought it would revolve around Edward and show his change slowly. The plot didn't necessarily fit the title and the description in the story but all in all it was good. Well written with a few minor errors here and there but hey, nobody's perfect. A bit stereotypical but sometimes we all need to read something like that. Good job and keep it up.

That was probably the best way to make up.

Thank you author for Avril's song and Jonas Brothers. Ahhh childhood.

Oh no. The author must be a psychic. This is the next scenario I had in mind. Considering this is one of those stereotypical stories out there. My next guess was a rebound. Dang this is going according to what I had in mind.

I really like the part where Bella was writing about chainsaw and all that. That was pretty funny IMO. That teacher though is too uptight. That would've been a great thriller book. I guess he was too closed minded in that way. I'd rather someone write what they feel than fake feelings. That makes any story bland.

Wasn't the type of punishment I was expecting but I guess that will do. Actually no, I think she should be punished some more. That was too light. Good going though Bella.
Volvo are one of the safest cars out there so the outcome of the incident wasn't as convincing for me I guess? Not to mention there was no airbag in the description of the inside of the car when Bella entered it after the Incident. I guess there wasn't enough research done on the Volvo. But yeah that's something that should've been included there.

If Lauren doesn't get punished for broadcasting that the. this is really a stereotypical story. sighs. I guess I'm expecting too much. My standard in Twilight fan fictions has gone up ever since I read The Sins of My Past so please excuse me for being like this. If you read that story you would understand where I'm coming from. It drew a lot of raw emotions from me and it made me sympathize to the story to a level I haven't in published novels.

No offense but this is so stereo typically done that I expected this to happen when I first read the story. Albeit this is fiction and done by an ammature it still makes it hard for me to comprehend why stories always use this type of scenario. The whole accident and getting the record broadcasted to school makes this work really fiction. For one, the broadcasting room is locked and only authorized people can get in there. Maybe Lauren seduced that person to get the keys, oh well. Two, the moment I read the part where Lauren was holding her phone while Bella explained to them by the pool how she was only using Edward I already knew this was going to happen which in itself isn't surprising but predictable. Three, the accident scene is really used too much in stories that sometimes it's already making the story boring. The accident scene is too predictable IMO. The more I read the less feeling I feel from the story. Sorry.

It didn't really ummm how to say this. The confession scene felt oddly lighter than it should've been IMO. It just didn't have that depth I was looking forward to. And the whole revealing my true self scene was overpowered by the confession and wasn't given time to shine which would've been an amazing scene had it just focused on Bella finally snapping and telling her fake friends she wants to be real. The love confession overshadowed that and the whole thing felt off for me. Idk if I'm the only one who felt this way. But I really wanted more scenes put into her revealing her true self. And I wanted more time for their relationship to develop it all seems too fast and a bit unrealistic. True this is a fiction but someone a tinge of reality makes the work more amazing and touching to read. Well considering this is the work of an ammature and not a professional author I guess I just expected too much. It still was a good scene for a non professional writer. I guess for me, it just didn't reach my expectation. Still this is fanfiction so that should work i guess.

I seriously don't get the reason why you have to act like a queen bee to be visible. There are different ways to be popular and choosing to be a queen bee usually means you end up being the antagonist in the story. Not to mention how tiring and stressful pretending to be someone you're not is. I'd rather be with friends who I can be myself and not be judged by them than be with fakes who don't really care about you but hang out with you to be popular. Trust me, I tried being friends with a queen bee because she didn't seem that bad only to end up being told I have to dress and act a certain way to make the cut. Well, sorry but I did not go to this university to dress up and act a certain way that makes me question my identity. I went there to study and learn not to play Barbie dress up and end up as Barbie 2.o.

Lol Edward checking his stuff before school is so me. Not to mention by need to bring a scientific calculator wherever I go. It's fun playing with the functions. Though I really want to have a graphing one but it's expensive as hell. And I don't think there's anything wrong with checking your schedule and if you got everything before going to bed. At least you won't be one of those people who forget their blue books before the exam and had to rush to the other building to buy one run back to class to find out the test already started making you run to your seat and take the exam only realizing you needed a scientific calculator and not bringing one. Taking the exam knowing you will fail and only realizing you didn't have that class in your schedule.

oh here we go again with the stereotypical wanting to blend in girl. sighs. I really don't get why some people do that? why play by the rules of the game when you can make your own? Nobody said this world is only fit for one game. Besides it's highly likely that it would backfire and bite you back in the aone day. No offense but it's usually the quiet and hard working ones who succeed in the future not the social butterflies who only know how to spread their legs and use their other head. They usually end up having kids earlier in life before they can even start a career. Not saying that having kids early is bad but if you can't support them and their needs then that's when things end up being bad. And honestly, the hard working nerds who get bullied a lot are gonna be their bosses one day. It's nature way of ensuring karma bites them back hard. It's the Newton's third law action and reaction, with every action there is an equal and opposite reaction.

actually I'm more attracted to brains and personality rather than beauty. if he was blessed with good looks that would just be a bonus. what would I get with a condescending handsome guy who can't even make his own coffee or wash the dishes when I can be with a guy who is plain yet intellectually matches me and can actually hold a conversation without being offended when I correct him with something. Also the best guy would be one who know how to cook. cause food is love.

Im confused is serenade a bitch orfake

really like this story its sweet and cute. has lots of drama! good job!