Reviews for HiruSena: Who's the Fool
MissyCatherine chapter 1 . 5/11/2019
This is so good! Please update!
jesadawnn1991 chapter 15 . 3/5/2019
Did you move the story to a different to site to finish it? Or has it been abandoned? It’s really good. Please finish it.
Guest chapter 15 . 9/5/2018
Please write more
Ryan Mashall chapter 4 . 2/21/2017
I can only see this ending with hiruma devestated tht this was all a prank, theyre toying w/feelings here...
Sky-beat chapter 15 . 12/3/2016
the story is dropped or not? way to long from update.
Guest chapter 15 . 7/21/2016
Please continue! I want to know what happens!
Grace-Logan chapter 15 . 9/30/2015
It's been two years since you put up the author note... Are you going to finish this? It'd be really awesome if you could come back (reality permitting of course) and let us all know what happens. Like, do they tell Hiruma that it was a joke? Is Hiruma angry or hurt if he does find out? Is he sad? Would he ask about the bullies trying to whore Sena? If they were real or not part of the deal? Do they just call it off and encourage the relationship even further?

Hiruma doesn't seem to know that it's a joke yet but surely he'd think he would have remembered asking Sena out right? Maybe he catches a glimpse or their followers and starts to piece things together? Or perhaps hears them speaking when he goes to the bathroom in the restruant? I mean, they're outside and there's a small rectangle window open and they're all hiding out behind the building to avoid getting the police called on them for loitering and suspicious behaviour.

Hiruma would be so hurt if he didn't figure it out by April fools... Actually, at this point, I think he'd be hurt if he found out at all. They've gone too far for a joke if they tell him now I fear!

So, are you going to continue this?
AriesDanger24 chapter 15 . 9/20/2015
...please need more of this! This was so fun! I don't want to hear about the spies! I want to hear about how the date is going! I want to know how it ends please!~~~
zombie4queen chapter 15 . 5/27/2015
Yae.
YourSassyTeacher chapter 15 . 4/20/2015
ghaaaa... it's been so long since you updated this D:
will you ever continue this?
I freaking love it!
Julia chapter 15 . 2/24/2015
You should really update this is a great story i love it and so does my sister so please update
Glasses chapter 15 . 2/17/2015
So when is the next update? This is a really good story.
Guest chapter 15 . 10/7/2014
I really love this! Can't wait to see what happens should you continue!
RmeGamr chapter 13 . 8/15/2014
Do you plan on continuing this fic? I really like it and would like to see it continue!
Dephtilopilus chapter 15 . 7/5/2014
Yo!
Nice and funny story! I love the "spies" part (Mamori's reaction was just epic!)
Please, please please! Continueeeee!
Ou alors écris juste un résumé de ce que tu voulais faire! Pitié!
(Sorry I write in French because I can't translate that!)
Tchus!
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