Awesome. Completely, ridiculously awesome. You know what my least favorite thing about fanfiction is? The fact that fics like this have, as of now, eleven reviews, while completely crappy Percabeth ones have hundreds. This is the best fic that I've read in a long time, and one of the first that I though truly captured Luke's motivations. I did notice one typo: "She had need Luke, more than she needed anything." I assume the first one is also supposed to be "needed." But honestly, for a fic this long, one typo is brilliant. I'm repeating myself, but awesome, awesome, awesome job! :)

Wow...

The simple power and emotion you portray in Luke, coupled with the flashbacks and memories, made this one of the most powerful pieces I have ever read. You are simply an amazing author.

luke... *sniff sniff* ...such a good kid...

Awesome, awesome, awesome.

Added to my quality PJO FF community.

I don't know how you fit all that detail into so few words.

-haubing

I LOVE THIS.

It's wonderful, perfect, awesome, sad, painful, angsty, prettiful, achingly haunting good, simple, tragic, complex and so many other things that it's hard to put it in words. It's just ... (why do words fail you at times like this?) ... I can't say more honestly. I've been pondering for two days on something insightful to write here, but I'm speechless.

Just ... lovely.

I love it! Beautifully written. You capture Luke's ebil character well. A tad angsty, too, which I applaud you for. Overall, a great story! :)

This is wonderful! You really matched Luke's character well. The only thing is that Kronos tried to take over Luke while he was on his quest. Also, i think that you should have more of Kronos telling Luke how little he could do before he agrees to join Kronos's army. Nice job.

Aww! I love Luke now. Poor thing. You are an awesome writer!

wow! that was fabulous! it reminded me of backbiter. you should continue that story. anyways, this was amazing because it had luke and kronos in it and you writing it!

Brilliant.

Aww poor Luke :( Lovely felings though, captured him perfectly. I'm glad you didn't percieve him as the good guy, who's been manipulated, but rather the I don't know... just the guy who had a tough life. What I'm trying to say is, I'm glad he's evil. Okay, makes no sense, but whatever. Great one shot, really nice.

Love the song BTW, Pain Redefined... :D

Not specail? I'm... I'm speechless. I seriously can't think of a statement to define this masterpeice. Seriously.

'where would we be if it weren't for those who questioned what they were taught?' Very philosophic.

Here are some words to describe this, since I can't seem to form a sentence that can describe this.

Beautiful

Wonderful

OMG

Fantabulicios. (Okay, that one was...odd.)

It's good, Luke seams a little OOC, but I can see why you would need him to be, he seams heartless ni the books, but this sheads new light.

7/10