Me da lastima la pobre de Kagome, ahora ni solo tiene que tolerar a Inuyasha y las maldades de Sesshomaru. Realmente deseo que Touga pueda ser castigado por lo que le está haciendo Kagome con sus manipulaciones. Espero que Kagome pueda manejar lo que le arrojarán y el bueno para nada de Touga al menos evite que se lastime en la cocina.

This is just annoyingly long. I give up. This is so frustrating. Sesshou is ooc and I hate Kagome, idk why! Goodbye to the highrated story.

I love the flow of your story. So beliveable.

Can I just say that... I LOVED THIS STORY! The pacing, the dialogue, the characterization, the gradual relationships with the characters... just the story as a whole, just everything! Loved it! Nothing felt too rushed or too slow, it wasn't bogged down by complete out-of-characterness or a random sex scene. I loved the gradual build of Sess and Kags relationship and Inuyasha had me cracking up laughing at several points (his dialogue was perfect! Lol So him!). How everyone melded within the story and at the end was nice.
The only cons in the story were some grammar or spelling and confusing details (or lack thereof) but all of which were minor and did not take away from the enjoyment of the story at all. I looked forward to reading this every night before bed and I am sad to see it end, because that means I've got to search for another good/finished story to read lol, but happy that it did end and with a happy ending. :D So much kudos to you! Fantastic writing!
Too bad I haven't watched much Naruto and am not a fan of Sakura or I would love to check out your other fics. ( ShikaTema;) ) Read 'Just Say Please' years ago and remember loving that. Got to check out your other Inu fics now. Until then, ciao

Love it. A great story to read.

I don't remember if I had commented when I read this before, but I loved this fic. It was fabulous, thank you!

The ending was rather abrupt.
I like the portrayal of both Kagome and Sesshomaru’s personalities.
Love the story

Really interesting story -
I like this pairing good that the change did go well and naraku really was put down real fast ...
Cute how she meet again with her mother , and uncle ken is great even when he was a real goat at first...
Hope you write more story's like this and maybe even crossovers with inuyasha and other stories.

Do you know the moment you want to hit something ...
It happened two time at least in this chap , he pulls his confession of his feelings our in a real long complicated way...what is real cute and sweet that he shows this-

...and this darn stupid Bastard of a spider ...is he a Bastard to break of this confession and showing of this two feeling to each other , bevot he really can show that he wants her as his mate with all of het faults and good things
...with his stupid attack. ...could he nor wait half an hour or two. ..

But maybe this could make them so controlled angry that one power hit takes it all from both...maybe use the stone that he owns to make it stron get ...so they can back to thethe talk and finish and kiss...

So kagome more or less did forgive tough for Zim being an stupid Ass with how he did things...because he really did want to make things better for his children but was under demonic crazy influence
... A big fight at home Baraka got hopeful a lot g , ck to the head and was permanent hurt so not to strong. ...and bother his attachment areally gone.

And I really love this family time while walking in the garden as mother father two children and the little brother-

I really do like the young bat queen to be- she really did seem to have grown and made her flock real big in that short time- and how they kicked out this stupid visitors who did fight and used there children as shild or distraction...who does this ...?
Shiori is really cute and that Rin and shippo now find a new friend in her to play and learn.
Poor sessho can't show his feelings . but he will learn and Inu really does slowly grow up now

Even more stupid when one things about how sloe they are with breeding and growing up as children. I meen both inu and sessho are still real young even when they are over 100yeats , but thy are still more or less teens
So this Bastards who use there children like this than protect them with everything and put them not in danger , need to see things more clearly.
Human can breed way faster . they grow up fast an can married with 15 years and get pregnant soon and child in them grows fast too. So even when they live near immortal lives and are more powerful , they are most likely already in this time 1demon to 100human so they should protect every one of there children and maybe think about bringing frest blook that breeds fastar into there demon lines and then breed back to ouse breed overy time. a

I love that he did bring back Rin, I did wait for this moment since kagome started to change things in the castle and made it more homely and lively - the little girl deserves to be with her father figure and gain a mother in kagome and little brother in shippou -

Now they only need to heal her or better help her change more easily without pain and fear.
Also I love how sesshomaru changed here and there and accepted his brother , and Inu too changed and got a little more thoughtful and calm-

And put this boot licker of visiting demons in Rhee rightful place . ...as servants who have to learn that they are not that important and are a tiny part of a big whole , and it is better to follow humble and with there heart and would give there life to protect there country and people . Than be stupid as asses who will loose there live more sooner than later against stronger foes when they act like they do now ...this wannabe not real visiting demons...

So he was right ...this two are the same...Malik ...is he kagomes great grandfather or something like this? It would explain some things...her temper , that she is not like normal miko, and so on.

But Touga. ..really is a stupid Ass turd...near nara level or already more bad...maybe death changed his brain or one git to often to the head when fighting ...

Hope they slowly can find out who is attacking her... I mean Malik already found out she would tell things bit can't as forced to be silent... and is Hutt by something dark... maybe when kagomes does wash and Malik is the first one there to add his smell he finally can learn what she is to him...a grand daughter maybe even. ...could hAve beven when one did fall down in the well. ..to her time...when she really is from one of his children in the future with the miko he mated.
...poor guy...but I think that will calm him down when he has something to protect and more family-

Toga seems really stupid . With hurting her like this and nearly killing her or trying to kill her he Wil not get what he wants... happiness and family for his sons.
Inuyasha learns to tolerate seshomaru because of her and seshomaru too... when she would die they ate free to let loose to do as they wish..and Inuyash would not hold anything back to die or go crazy when letting his demon free..
So toga will not get what he wants... it is more like the bad things he did see as possibility for his sons will happen because toga is stupid and try t kill or make her go crazy. ... the woman who could make it better.
Hope she can tel someone of toga ghost who is an Ass. ..so she can get help.

Was that an "Anastasia" reference?