Oh, how sad! Never expected Az to actually die (I was hoping for some healing from Raw, or for some magical connection with DG). It's good that DG has Cain to 'run to'!
(OK, my mind takes strange turns once in awhile. I haven't read any Jeb/Az stories before. They're worried about Wyatt being so much older than DG? Az is almost 12 years older than Jeb!)
Anyhow - enjoyed (as much as one can a sad story) this a lot - thanx for sharing!

What a beautifully bittersweet tale!

You got me crying! Great story!

OMG,so sad!So well written but still sad! *weep* Excellent job!

Aww. I was so hoping that she would pull through that DG would use some of her power. Maybe give her some grey streaks in her hair. Age her abit. Sighs. Oh well it was beautifully written GREAT Job. Love Cain and DG together. Write more of any DG/Cain soon. Hugs.

oh my goodness I could really and truly listen to him say Darlin all day long *Sighs* What a Man What a Man. Tall Strong and Handsome to boot with Killer blue eyes. Yum Yum Yum! GREAT Job. WRite more soon. Hugs you.

So having just come from a rehearsal where I (Juliet) impaled myself and swore undying love for my Romeo, and let me just tell you how I've been crying through those last lines, you have completely reduced me to a puddle of weeping sadness.

Congratulations!

"He would be there." I love that. And you really captured something special with DG's instant feelings after Az goes. But poor Azzie! RIP, lovely.

Farrah K.

Very well written, but you made it end so sad! Poor, poor Jeb.

*sniffles*

Sad as it was, "butt cheek #2" was awesome. Also, I didn't see until you wrote this chapter that their relationship was already really established, even if it was just between the two of them and just implied by the others. Bravo!

Damn you made me cry! Which is the sign of a very good story. I'm gonna go bury my head in a pillow now. Very emotional. This felt very real. Thanks for the read!

Az died? "sniff". Beautiful story. "sniff" You did an exact job of describing Az's passing and everyone's suffering. "sniff" You killed Az. "sob"

Oh God! Az was my favourite character, I cried so much that I couldn't actually see the page. I'm so glad that you mentioned that she was beautiful right up until she died, it just seems right. What an amazing but heart-breaking chapter. Poor darling DG,

Thank you for your amazing words,

Lexie x

whew. i'm totally wiping tears from my eyes. that was so heartwrenching and sad. poor jeb oh it makes me want to cry...a very well written chapter. definately tugs at the heart :)

once again another good chapter. Hope you aren't stopping here.

And that's why you needed to write the second part. Good job on a heartbreaking subject.