| Reviews for What Should Have Been |
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   fictionalmike chapter 40 . 6/19 A lovely re-imagining of a crucial episode in NCIS canon. Mike |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2018 Ugh how pathetic bringing kelly in like this Badly done |
| Darth Becky 726 chapter 24 . 8/2/2017 I've gotta ask. Do Sean Murray and Rocky Caroll look like McGee and Vance? |
| Darth Becky 726 chapter 21 . 7/31/2017 Blackladder married Bellasario? How original. I'm sorry, I don't mean to sound cynical. I reall am loving this story. |
| Darth Becky 726 chapter 12 . 7/31/2017 Base Commander's name is Micheal Weatherly? How original. Come up with that by your self, did you? I noticed that Tony was suspiciously absent from this one. Why is that? |
| The Seven of Us chapter 41 . 6/30/2016 I really don't understand how this doesn't have more love. Personally, I would have Kelly alone being able to see the ghosts because she was supposed to die but lived through unknown circumstances. But that's me. Also, I would give people a heads up about how this kind of jumps all around-something like 'series of oneshots in the same AU' in the summary. But otherwise, this was beautifully written and I look forward to the next chapter, if there will be one. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/8/2016 Mann is actually would have been the "fourth" ex-wife, the second ex-wife was revealed in Season 11. |
| Guest chapter 41 . 6/8/2016 I actually wondered what would happened IF Kelly had survived but had suffered seemingly permanent amnesia due to injuries from the car crash; thus forcing her to be raised by another family while her own father believed her daughter to be dead? What if she had started to gradually remember bits and pieces after seeing her father once on TV (which happens on Season 3) only to fully remember by the time Harper Dearing's attack on NCIS happens and she hears it on the news? |
| Guest chapter 15 . 6/6/2016 Really love this but not sure if you know but gibbs is car is a 1971 Dodge Challenger RT Hemi not a classic charger.. Sorry I'm just being fussy lol but I have the same car and it's a beauty my favourite car. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 5/27/2016 Director of NCIS really? What a marysue fic. You should quit writing. |
| Savannah Potter chapter 1 . 3/19/2015 Are you ever gonna continue this? Please? |
| Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 9/2/2014 Excellent start! Terrific idea. |
| BIG chapter 24 . 7/16/2014 love how you used there real names |
| Slytherin Studios chapter 41 . 6/16/2013 I love your story, please udpate soon. |
| Darth Sidious II chapter 1 . 3/14/2013 love the story but one question I imaging Kelly looks like either Emma Stone or that wendy's girl on the commicals |
