Interesting. I was gonna stop reading when I read chapter 2 because Jack seemed so OOC but I decided to keep reading and what do ya know! Little Jackies kept some of his Jokery traites! ) Nice, update soon!

This is rather amusing, I must say, though I find the whole marrige-romance idea to be slightly out-of-character. I'm surprised that no one seems to find the whole "gay" thing to be a "socially/morally wrong" subject, or whatever you want to call it. Oh, and, sweetie, maybe you should go and look over your grammer/sentence structure just a bit. Other than that, this is getting good. Love how the Joker's like "I LIKE that" (insert sexy growl from him to Jonny here). That - "Jonny" - is how a couple fellow reviewer/writers and I spell the shortening of Jonathan's name, although yours is probably the correct version as it is more commonly used. Make the Joker/Crane good and graphic for me hahaha.

Gaw that's a cute story. I like the way Jack says "I like that..." XD I can just imagine him saying that with a fake pout and a nod. Keep up the good work!

Ah, sparks are starting to fly! Can't wait to see where this goes...

Aw, that was sweet, bringing a rose! Jonathan's going to be difficult, it would seem...

Oh, this is funny! I'm interested to see where you go with this-can't wait for Jack to make the scene!

please continue